- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a comprehensive article nomination that was unsuccessful. Please do not modify it.
Guts and Glory
- Nominated by: Darth Needham 22:43, April 6, 2012 (UTC)
- Nomination comments:Good old KOTOR article, why not?
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- Exiled Jedi
- First, you should move this page to the book's full title.
- Do you want me to try and move it for you?--Exiled Jedi
(Greetings) 17:09, April 9, 2012 (UTC)
- Do you want me to try and move it for you?--Exiled Jedi
- You also need to include more information about the contents of the book. I am pretty sure that it mentioned several different band members.
- It would good if you summarized the progession of who was in the band at different times using your own words.
- You need to mention when the book was written in the article.
- You will need find a source for the year, the game is not a source for the year.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 17:09, April 9, 2012 (UTC)
- You will need find a source for the year, the game is not a source for the year.--Exiled Jedi
- If the game did not say that the band was killed by Calo Nord then do not speculate that it might have occured.
- You still need to mention that the book broke off when they were about to go and perform for Davik.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 17:09, April 9, 2012 (UTC)
- You still need to mention that the book broke off when they were about to go and perform for Davik.--Exiled Jedi
The information in the behind the scenes section should probably go inside of Gamemechanics tags.- Please note the Endgame tag for further reference.--Exiled Jedi
(Greetings) 17:09, April 9, 2012 (UTC)
- Please note the Endgame tag for further reference.--Exiled Jedi
Revan was not a Jedi at the time of the events on Taris.- Please include a Behind the scenes section mentioning what source the item appeared in.
- Please look at some other CAs and follow their example when writing the BTS.
- In the BTS, you should also mention that the journal provided information necessary to opening the lockbox in the room.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 17:09, April 9, 2012 (UTC)
- I will review the article again after you fix these issues.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 23:00, April 6, 2012 (UTC)
- The about section should be a history section instead.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 17:09, April 9, 2012 (UTC)
- First, you should move this page to the book's full title.
- hows that? (Can't move page per what I wrote in the SH) Darth Needham 23:29, April 6, 2012 (UTC)
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