Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Grunda Dolma

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Contents

  • 1 Grunda Dolma
    • 1.1 (2 ECs/1 Users/3 Total)
      • 1.1.1 Support
      • 1.1.2 Object
        • 1.1.2.1 501st
        • 1.1.2.2 Exiled Jedi
      • 1.1.3 Comments

Grunda Dolma

  • Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 12:28, July 16, 2014 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Another gladiator while I have the sticker book to hand

(2 ECs/1 Users/3 Total)

Support

  1. The fight should have been longer. Clone Commander Lee Talk 12:10, July 21, 2014 (UTC)
  2. ECvote 501st dogma(talk) 11:56, July 31, 2014 (UTC)
  3. ECvote Corellian PremierJedi symbolThe Force will be with you always 01:07, August 3, 2014 (UTC)

Object

  • Mantoid seems to be the name and not the model of this droid. Clone Commander Lee Talk 13:14, July 16, 2014 (UTC)
    • Fixed. Ayrehead02 (talk) 13:49, July 16, 2014 (UTC)
501st
  • "...fought for Dooku's glory.[2] During the battle Dolma fought..." Kill a fought pls.
    • Removed one. You actually only see Dolma destroy the droid immediately. Ayrehead02 (talk) 08:56, July 31, 2014 (UTC)
  • The categories need some work. You're missing individuals from unidentified gender, and the |Dolma, Granda thing can go. 501st dogma(talk) 23:36, July 30, 2014 (UTC)
    • Fixed. Ayrehead02 (talk) 08:56, July 31, 2014 (UTC)
Exiled Jedi
  • Is Asajj Ventress still confirmed to be a Rattataki after the mess with The Clone Wars?
    • Man I totally forgot about all that crap. Fixed and referenced. Ayrehead02 (talk) 13:56, August 3, 2014 (UTC)
  • While the miniature piece has some resemblance to the character, I do not believe there is enough similarity to include the miniature set in the sources section.
    • Removed. Ayrehead02 (talk) 13:56, August 3, 2014 (UTC)
  • The last sentence of the introduction mentions Asajj Ventress winning overall, which makes no sense without more information. Please mention the contest in the introduction.--Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 02:05, August 3, 2014 (UTC)
    • Added, but it takes it over 250 so moving this to GAN. Ayrehead02 (talk) 13:56, August 3, 2014 (UTC)

Comments

  • I believe there is a miniature from the Wizards of the Coast game that resembles this piece. I'll have to do some checking.--Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 05:04, July 22, 2014 (UTC)
    • Just went through all of the Rebelscum photoarchives and found this[1], is it the one you meant? I can kind of see the resemblance although the colors appear pretty off, still I'll include it if you like since the distinct hair and weapon seem the same. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:34, July 22, 2014 (UTC)
      • Yeah, a quick BTS mention of the piece and miniature set would be good.--Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 17:47, July 22, 2014 (UTC)
        • Added, had to split the article, but still under word count. Ayrehead02 (talk) 18:54, July 22, 2014 (UTC)