Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Groneman's

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Groneman's

  • Nominated by: AmazinglyCool Nightsisters symbol - JFO (talk) 13:56, 29 July 2023 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:
  • Date Archived: 00:31, 21 August 2023 (UTC)
  • Final word count: 188 words (0 introduction, 110 body, 78 behind the scenes)
  • WookieeProject (optional): WP:THR, WP:COMICS

(3 ECs/1 Users/4 Total)

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Support

  1. ECvote Fan26 (Talk) 00:00, 3 August 2023 (UTC)
  2. ECvote TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 21:36, 11 August 2023 (UTC)
  3. Marvacian Archivist (talk) 11:38, 16 August 2023 (UTC)
  4. ECvote Lewisr (talk) 00:08, 21 August 2023 (UTC)

Object

Lew
  • Unless I missed it (I did check a couple times to be sure before leaving this), I didn't see Coruscant being referred to as a planet, or a she/her pronoun for Sian being used in the issue Lewisr (talk) 00:38, 3 August 2023 (UTC)
    • My apologies, everything should be properly sourced now. AmazinglyCool Nightsisters symbol - JFO (talk) 17:52, 5 August 2023 (UTC)
  • I don't believe Sian's affiliation to the Republic is citable to the first issue Lewisr (talk) 00:21, 12 August 2023 (UTC)
Marvac
  • Please add a disambiguation template as Groneman shares it's name with Tom Groneman, the assistant editor for The Last Jedi Adaptation 1 and Star Wars: Target Vader. Marvacian Archivist (talk) 06:44, 3 August 2023 (UTC)
  • Please state in your article that the comic issue is part of the Star Wars: The High Republic multimedia project's Phase 1. Marvacian Archivist (talk) 06:44, 3 August 2023 (UTC)
    • Addressed both. AmazinglyCool Nightsisters symbol - JFO (talk) 17:52, 5 August 2023 (UTC)
      • Regarding the last objection, you will need to use a separate reference as the Star Wars.com article reference you have used does not say that the comic is part of Phase 1. I recommend using this reference, (<ref name="High Republic Reader's guide">{{SW|url=news/every-star-wars-the-high-republic-book-and-comic-series|text=UPDATED: ''Star Wars: The High Republic'' Chronological Reader's Guide}}</ref>). Marvacian Archivist (talk) 19:46, 5 August 2023 (UTC)
  • Please reword the last sentence, particularly the external hyperlink as it does not make sense. Marvacian Archivist (talk) 19:46, 5 August 2023 (UTC)
  • I think its important that you further specify where exactly Groneman's is in Steebark District. You can do this by mentioning how an old grill restaurant was right opposite Groneman's. Marvacian Archivist (talk) 15:37, 13 August 2023 (UTC)
    • Sorry to step in, but I discussed this with another EC before commenting, and we both agreed this really wasn't that relevant to be added to this page. I'll leave the final decision with Amazingly on whether it's included or not, however Lewisr (talk) 16:19, 13 August 2023 (UTC)
      • No worries! Anyway, I am still learning how to review articles accurately so if you think that my objection is unecessary, please feel free to step in :)! Marvacian Archivist (talk) 18:45, 13 August 2023 (UTC)
  • In your article you state that "The establishment consisted of an inside area connected to the outside through a bar." When you say bar, do you mean as in a cantina? If you do please pipelink bar to the Cantina page. Marvacian Archivist (talk) 15:37, 13 August 2023 (UTC)
  • Context for Aurebesh please. Marvacian Archivist (talk) 15:56, 13 August 2023 (UTC)
  • I think that the description of Groneman's itself will need further detail like mentioning the purple lighting in Groneman's. Marvacian Archivist (talk) 16:00, 13 August 2023 (UTC)
  • In the History part, I think you should mention how Sian Holt passed by Gronemans where several different species of aliens were sitting at. Marvacian Archivist (talk) 16:00, 13 August 2023 (UTC)
spookly
  • Seems like detailing regarding the coloring of the awning and the stools could be added.—spookywillowwtalk 14:40, 7 August 2023 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 00:30, 21 August 2023 (UTC)