Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Gribblehex

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Gribblehex

• Nominated by: Samonic 08:33, 20 July 2022 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Holding off my Nikardun nominations (preceding a possible and future big one :P) and my warmer nom while I check other novels for warmer appearances/mentions.
• WookieeProject (optional): Chiss, Novels

(4 ECs/1 Users/5 Total)

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Support

1. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 02:51, 6 August 2022 (UTC)
2. BloodOfIrizi (talk) 17:03, 6 August 2022 (UTC)
3. Fan26 (Talk) 17:55, 8 August 2022 (UTC)
4. OOM 224 18:21, 9 August 2022 (UTC)
5. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 08:16, 10 August 2022 (UTC)

Object

CC-8

• The article body reads as though Che'ri is terrible at the game, although the quote suggests that it's Thalias who is being called terrible. This could be clarified by adding who Che'ri is talking to in the quote attribution and phrasing the body with something like "Che'ri derided Thalias's capability at playing Gribblehex" Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 06:51, 1 August 2022 (UTC)
  • Fixed. Samonic 07:59, 1 August 2022 (UTC)

Fibblehex26

• "capability at playing the game." is a really awkward choice of wording...I'd recommend rewriting there. Fan26 (Talk) 18:11, 1 August 2022 (UTC)
  • Is the new wording adequate? Samonic 20:47, 1 August 2022 (UTC)

Thrawn

• Category:Chiss culture should be added. -ThrawnChiss7 (talk) 20:48, 1 August 2022 (UTC)
  • No, same thing as the Kilhorde objection on Crofyp's task force. We don't know if it's a Chiss game. Samonic 21:09, 1 August 2022 (UTC)
    • To interject here, if the game is played by Chiss, I think it's fair to say it's part of their culture. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 19:35, 9 August 2022 (UTC)
      • I disagree. There are quite a several things Chiss use that are part of others' cultures. Samonic 21:42, 9 August 2022 (UTC)
        • After discussing this with Braha on Discord, I have added the category. Samonic 22:38, 9 August 2022 (UTC)
          • Objection(s) overridden by EduCorps 08:57, 10 August 2022 (UTC)

Ziara

• the book never states that the game was for 2 players, so it should be removed. for all we know it could be played by 1 player, or even more than two BloodOfIrizi (talk) 22:05, 2 August 2022 (UTC)
  • apologies, misread the sentence. its fine in the body but should be removed from infobox as it implies that its only for 2 players. BloodOfIrizi (talk) 22:09, 2 August 2022 (UTC)
    • Thalias and Che'ri played it. Che'ri played with Dalvu. That means it's for two. Samonic 07:57, 3 August 2022 (UTC)

OOM

• The Lesser Evil date ref is too long, so a brief note and a pipelink to the template would be in order. OOM 224 18:02, 9 August 2022 (UTC)
  • Done. Should I apply this to all my Comprehensive articles? Samonic 18:07, 9 August 2022 (UTC)
    • Yep, I'd say so. A note that long shouldn't be directly transcluded on any article (I guess with the exception of Thrawn Ascendancy: Lesser Evil and other similar articles), regardless of article length. OOM 224 18:21, 9 August 2022 (UTC)
      • Got it, thanks. Samonic 19:09, 9 August 2022 (UTC)

Comments

• The audio file for this article will be added later today. Samonic 08:56, 20 July 2022 (UTC)
• Vote to strike held via Discord Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 09:38, 10 August 2022 (UTC)

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 08:57, 10 August 2022 (UTC)