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Gelesi's wife
- Nominated by: NaruHina Talk
21:43, March 12, 2011 (UTC) - Nomination comments: My FAN's pulchritudinous sweetheart.
(3 ECs/0 Users/3 Total)
Support
Menkooroo 04:38, March 17, 2011 (UTC)
Clean.—Jedi Kasra (comlink) 22:59, March 21, 2011 (UTC)
Looks good. ~ SavageBob 19:25, March 27, 2011 (UTC)
Object
- Yimmy's vife
Context is needed on Gelesi. The article introduces him like the reader should know who he is, but not everybody has read the FAN. :PMaybe create an article for the Captain of the Guard? The one currently linked to is a position in the Republic's Senate Guard. Probably not what you were looking for.Menkooroo 15:00, March 13, 2011 (UTC)
The article seems to assume the player takes a particular path through the game; can the templates be added that indicate that? ~ SavageBob 21:03, March 21, 2011 (UTC)- Who the Exile supported during hewr initial visit to Onderon has not been defined, so I moved the quote to the Bts. However, Gelesi's anxiety does not exist because of the Exile (and it predates that visit regardless) so his anxiety is canonical. I've added this to the Bts. Tags aren't necessary because the Bio does not reflect player choices. NaruHina Talk
05:25, March 27, 2011 (UTC)
- Who the Exile supported during hewr initial visit to Onderon has not been defined, so I moved the quote to the Bts. However, Gelesi's anxiety does not exist because of the Exile (and it predates that visit regardless) so his anxiety is canonical. I've added this to the Bts. Tags aren't necessary because the Bio does not reflect player choices. NaruHina Talk
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