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Gar Tafeed
- Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 13:13, 1 January 2023 (UTC)
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Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 22:54, 2 January 2023 (UTC)- LucaRoR
(Talk) 08:14, 6 January 2023 (UTC) 
JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 21:36, 6 January 2023 (UTC)
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Luca
"Tafeed and Fertha discussed Mothma, who was also present at the event, during the conversation." I think this sentence is missing something, or was it supposed to be "who was also present at the event during the conversation."?LucaRoR (Talk) 10:46, 2 January 2023 (UTC)
- The sentence seems fine to me, it's just "Tafeed and Fertha discussed Mothma during the conversation" with an embedded clause about Mothma. Ayrehead02 (talk) 18:49, 5 January 2023 (UTC)
Macaroni
It seems worth mentioning where the event took place.JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 18:34, 5 January 2023 (UTC)- As far as I can tell nothing actually establishes where the event was, I mentioned that they're flying on Coruscant since that's the most info we get, but they could be returning from a spaceport or similar. Ayrehead02 (talk) 18:49, 5 January 2023 (UTC)
- Ah for some reason I thought they were coming back from an event at the embassy. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 21:36, 6 January 2023 (UTC)
- As far as I can tell nothing actually establishes where the event was, I mentioned that they're flying on Coruscant since that's the most info we get, but they could be returning from a spaceport or similar. Ayrehead02 (talk) 18:49, 5 January 2023 (UTC)
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Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 21:36, 6 January 2023 (UTC)