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Gana Lavin's father
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ImpacticForce (Talk) 21:51, 28 February 2022 (UTC)
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Awesome, great work! Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 04:37, 5 March 2022 (UTC)
OOM 224 08:05, 6 March 2022 (UTC)- LucaRoR
(Talk) 08:15, 6 March 2022 (UTC) - —spookywillowwtalk 18:59, 6 March 2022 (UTC)
Just be careful about the difference between unspecified and unidentified species—the latter is for characters like Hobin Carsamba. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 01:16, 7 March 2022 (UTC)
Fan26 (Talk) 01:21, 7 March 2022 (UTC)
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Manoof
The linking of parent should be removed from the bolded father Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 12:11, 2 March 2022 (UTC)Need context for the personality of a republic soldier bit Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 12:11, 2 March 2022 (UTC)- To clarify, it should say that he lost his memories and thought he was a Republic Soldier. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 10:22, 3 March 2022 (UTC)
- Fixed.
ImpacticForce (Talk) 17:09, 3 March 2022 (UTC)
- Fixed.
- To clarify, it should say that he lost his memories and thought he was a Republic Soldier. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 10:22, 3 March 2022 (UTC)
Does/should the waiter have an article? Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 12:11, 2 March 2022 (UTC)Homeworld=Taris Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 12:11, 2 March 2022 (UTC)- Addressed all. The game never explicitly states that the father was from Taris, should it still stay in the homeworld field?
ImpacticForce (Talk) 16:30, 2 March 2022 (UTC)
- Addressed all. The game never explicitly states that the father was from Taris, should it still stay in the homeworld field?
I had a think and I agree. Further, I don't think we actually know he resides on Taris, only that he has influence and his daughter is there. For all we know he's offworld. Did he also raise Gana, since nanny-bots and nannies are a thing? Already removed the homeworld mention. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 10:21, 3 March 2022 (UTC)- I reworded the article. The only thing that suggests he's on Taris is that she says she's "Going to tell 'Daddy' about this." But that could easily mean a communicator or something.
ImpacticForce (Talk) 17:09, 3 March 2022 (UTC)
- I reworded the article. The only thing that suggests he's on Taris is that she says she's "Going to tell 'Daddy' about this." But that could easily mean a communicator or something.
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Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 01:16, 7 March 2022 (UTC)