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Gaggaran Gu
- Nominated by: JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 18:51, 4 October 2023 (UTC)
- Nomination comments:
- Date Archived: 02:54, 20 October 2023 (UTC)
- Final word count: 77 words (0 introduction, 47 body, 30 behind the scenes)
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Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 18:57, 5 October 2023 (UTC)
—spookywillowwtalk 02:44, 20 October 2023 (UTC)
Lewisr (talk) 02:53, 20 October 2023 (UTC)
Object
Lew
This might be slightly nitpicky, but wouldn't it be better to say Loran knew Gaggaran, and not the reverse? As that's what the story does indicateLewisr (talk) 18:08, 5 October 2023 (UTC)- I don't think it actually makes a difference, and I use the other order in the next sentence. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 01:09, 16 October 2023 (UTC)
- My issue with the wording is that it almost implies something not necessarily supported by the quote. It's possible that she knew Gaggaran via seeing her on the holonet or something, and Gaggaran not know her Lewisr (talk) 01:38, 16 October 2023 (UTC)
- Frankly I think the quote actually clarifies that it's not the latter case since Alees is bragging about Loran's connections, but it's not worth fighting over, so I've changed it. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 21:09, 19 October 2023 (UTC)
- My issue with the wording is that it almost implies something not necessarily supported by the quote. It's possible that she knew Gaggaran via seeing her on the holonet or something, and Gaggaran not know her Lewisr (talk) 01:38, 16 October 2023 (UTC)
- I don't think it actually makes a difference, and I use the other order in the next sentence. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 01:09, 16 October 2023 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 02:53, 20 October 2023 (UTC)