Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Frinn Mak Traveling Circus

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Frinn Mak Traveling Circus

• Nominated by: DarthRuiz30 (talk) 02:34, September 7, 2019 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:

(3 ECs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

1. Zed42 (talk) 03:02, September 7, 2019 (UTC)
2. Fan26 (Talk) 13:02, September 8, 2019 (UTC)
3. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 21:24, September 8, 2019 (UTC)
4. —spookywilloww^talk 23:13, September 8, 2019 (UTC)
5. QuiGonJinn ^(Talk) 06:23, September 16, 2019 (UTC)

Object

Zed

• "At some point after Izal Garsea left Batuu in 21 ABY, the circus was heading for Cuyacan when it rescued the stranded smuggler Izal Garsea aboard her starship the Meridian after it ran out of fuel." Could you reword this sentence so as to not introduce Garsea twice? Zed42 (talk) 02:40, September 7, 2019 (UTC)
  • Changed the first mention to the Garsea family--DarthRuiz30 (talk) 02:46, September 7, 2019 (UTC)

Spooky

• I think the Twitter template could be incorporated into where the date reference links to this screenshot of Martin's tweet.
  • I feel that its really not necessary and its better addressed with the screenshot, but if anyone else feel that the templete should be used let me know and I'll add it--DarthRuiz30 (talk) 20:10, September 7, 2019 (UTC)
• Could you make it so only the date is referenced to the date ref, so it doesn't include the first sentence and such?—spookywilloww^talk 16:13, September 7, 2019 (UTC)
  • Added ref--DarthRuiz30 (talk) 20:10, September 7, 2019 (UTC)

Fan

• "her" should be pipelinked to "Sexes". Fan26 (Talk) 18:46, September 7, 2019 (UTC)
  • Done--DarthRuiz30 (talk) 20:10, September 7, 2019 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 06:23, September 16, 2019 (UTC)