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Fried pom-cake
- Nominated by: CometSmudge (talk) 03:26, 19 April 2024 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: Based on his detailed description of the cake's flavor, I assumed that Pop has eaten eaten the cakes.
- Date Archived: 00:19, 24 April 2024 (UTC)
- Final word count: 190 words (0 introduction, 153 body, 37 behind the scenes)
- Word count at nomination time: 199 words (0 introduction, 162 body, 37 behind the scenes)
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Support
Lewisr (talk) 04:11, 20 April 2024 (UTC)-
Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 16:24, 20 April 2024 (UTC) 
—spookywillowwtalk 00:18, 24 April 2024 (UTC)
Object
spookly
It's usually best to introduce what species the food is edible to by directly stating it rather than having it inferred later on, ie if "…type of cake edible to humans and Iktotchi." which also then introduces the Diet link.- Should hot be pipelinked to Temperature? The novel also calls them "golden," which would need to be both in the infobox and article body as a physical trait (|description=).
I do think that there's unnecessary detailing of events here to be re-prosified and trimmed. It'd be enough to state that the four individuals shared a meal while on that repair station—and clip the the noticing in the hangar bit, the delivering supplies info, as neither are tied to the cakes themselves. ex. roughly— (X pair invited X pair to share a meal on the space station to discuss Rwoh and the Stormwall…).—spookywillowwtalk 15:06, 21 April 2024 (UTC)- I made the changes. CometSmudge (talk) 03:03, 22 April 2024 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 00:18, 24 April 2024 (UTC)