Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Fractal urchin

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Fractal urchin

  • Nominated by: Tinwe(comlink) 09:45, March 9, 2012 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Gotta love the name.

(2 ECs/2 Users/4 Total)

Support

  1. I might be rusty on reviewing, but this looks good to me. Well done Tinwe. (: – Tm_T@Wookieepedia:~$ 09:50, March 9, 2012 (UTC)
  2. NaruHina Talk Anakinsolo 17:07, March 9, 2012 (UTC)
  3. ECvote Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 23:52, March 9, 2012 (UTC)
  4. ECvote graestan(talk) 16:15, March 16, 2012 (UTC)

Object

  1. I actually think the last sentence of the IU portion is a bit extraneous and unnecessary. The statement of when the book was still in use by can be moved to the earlier mention of the book, and stating that it introduced the life-form to generations is borderline speculative. graestan(talk) 17:31, March 10, 2012 (UTC)
    • Addressed. Tinwe(comlink) 18:20, March 10, 2012 (UTC)
  2. Missing reftag. graestan(talk) 16:55, March 15, 2012 (UTC)
    • Added. Tinwe(comlink) 06:45, March 16, 2012 (UTC)

Comments

  • 195 words at the moment, so please be gentle with copyedits. I really wouldn't want to stretch this to GA, as I think it would be too much of a stretch given the limited content. Tinwe(comlink) 09:45, March 9, 2012 (UTC)