Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Flying leaf

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Flying leaf

Nominated by: JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 21:49, 4 March 2022 (UTC)
Nomination comments: The reason people read Wookieepedia—to learn about flying leaves.
WookieeProject (optional): WP:EWOKS

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Support

—spookywilloww^talk 04:44, 9 March 2022 (UTC)
Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 08:55, 11 March 2022 (UTC)
Loqiical (talk) 03:52, 14 March 2022 (UTC)
LucaRoR ^(Talk) 14:10, 14 March 2022 (UTC)
1358 ^(Talk) 18:21, 14 March 2022 (UTC)

Object

Spooky

~~In putting the body into a wordcounter site, seems to clock out at 166 words. Could you verify the count from your end, and adjust if it's indeed over the 165?~~—spookywilloww^talk 19:09, 6 March 2022 (UTC)
- Yeah it's over, added sectioning and quotes. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 01:23, 9 March 2022 (UTC)

Flying Luca

~~Are there no other available images?~~
- Yeah I can add one, hopefully by tomorrow.
  - Added. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 23:37, 11 March 2022 (UTC)
~~"it was then that the evil Snow King's Iceheads attacked the flying leaf," this sentence is pretty wordy, could you perhaps slightly reword it?~~
- Huh? Not seeing an issue with that sentence.
  - I was thinking about something like: "However, the evil Snow King's Iceheads soon later attacked the flying leaf…" it removes the "then that the" that doesn't really roll the tongue. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 15:54, 9 March 2022 (UTC)
    - I disagree. It doesn't seem problematic to me, and I don't really prefer that wording. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 19:21, 9 March 2022 (UTC)
      - Fair, it was just a suggestion :) LucaRoR ^(Talk) 19:33, 9 March 2022 (UTC)
~~In the infobox; Owners = Leaf Queen, Location = Endor, and Purpose = Flying?~~ LucaRoR ^(Talk) 15:00, 9 March 2022 (UTC)
- Sure, not used to doing vehicles all that much. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 15:15, 9 March 2022 (UTC)
I don't understand if the flying leaf is one or if there are multiple leafs. From the intro and description sections, it sounds like there is only one, but the History section claims that: "the queen sent a flying leaf to Bright Tree Village" implying that more exist. Which is it? LucaRoR ^(Talk) 05:49, 14 March 2022 (UTC)
- We don't know. The Ewoks call it "a flying leaf" but it's never established if there are more. It would make sense seeing as she's the Leaf Queen but no way to be sure. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 14:06, 14 March 2022 (UTC)
  - Makes sense. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 14:10, 14 March 2022 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 18:21, 14 March 2022 (UTC)