Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/First battle of Ossus

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First battle of Ossus

  • Nominated by: AmazinglyCool Nightsisters symbol - JFO (talk) 22:37, 26 January 2024 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:
  • Date Archived: 01:00, 11 February 2024 (UTC)
  • Final word count: 161 words (0 introduction, 128 body, 33 behind the scenes)
  • WookieeProject (optional): WP:CIS, WP:VG

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Support

  1. ECvote TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 15:40, 10 February 2024 (UTC)
  2. ECvote —spookywillowwtalk 21:24, 10 February 2024 (UTC)
  3. ECvote Lewisr (talk) 00:40, 11 February 2024 (UTC)

Object

Lew
  • The battle of Thule is infobox exclusive, if it's not relevant enough to be mentioned in the body it should be removed Lewisr (talk) 02:35, 27 January 2024 (UTC)
  • The Mace Windu quote is cited inconsistently betwen body and the quote template itself Lewisr (talk) 02:35, 27 January 2024 (UTC)
  • The page needs to note the battles IU mention in The New Essential Chronology Lewisr (talk) 02:35, 27 January 2024 (UTC)
    • Addressed. AmazinglyCool Nightsisters symbol - JFO (talk) 21:56, 2 February 2024 (UTC)
      • I think it's better to remove the Thule mention and battle in the infobox, it doesn't seem to be entirely relevant tbh Lewisr (talk) 06:51, 3 February 2024 (UTC)
  • "While also discussing battles at Bespin and Rhen Var, Jedi Master Mace Windu of the Jedi High Council stated to fellow Master Yoda that the planet would fall within days" The mention of the 'planet' here isn't overly clear which it refers to. Lewisr (talk) 06:51, 3 February 2024 (UTC)
  • I think the page needs a little restructuring, you mention that Ossus fell to the Separatists but then later mention that Mace says it will fall within days. It should really be the other way around Lewisr (talk) 06:51, 3 February 2024 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 00:40, 11 February 2024 (UTC)