- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a comprehensive article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
Fire-kraken
- Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 21:21, May 19, 2013 (UTC)
- Nomination comments:An aptly named species for the burner
(3 ECs/2 Users/5 Total)
Support
501st dogma(talk) 12:19, May 20, 2013 (UTC)- - Princess GLG 12:19, May 22, 2013 (UTC)
- Fe Nite (talk) 21:08, May 27, 2013 (UTC)
- Exiled Jedi
(Greetings) 17:41, June 2, 2013 (UTC) 
Commander Code-8 G'day, mate 22:37, June 7, 2013 (UTC)
Object
Regarding TCSWE: Could you add the volume number thing, like you have in the reff to TCSWE, to the Sources instead of the generic TCSWE? Also, for that volume and entry thing, you should not add the page numbers.Good work. 501st dogma(talk) 22:30, May 19, 2013 (UTC)- Added without page number. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:40, May 20, 2013 (UTC)
- Princess
Planet and novel need to be linked. Predator should not be linked as it goes to an article about a ship. (Some of these stuff I'm listing here could be considered "just do it", but since I've seen them in some of your other articles I'm decided to bring them to your attention.)- That's fair I do need to improve my linking I always forget just how many general term articles we have. Ayrehead02 (talk) 18:12, May 21, 2013 (UTC)
The double bracket of the infobox needs moved up.- Moved. Ayrehead02 (talk) 18:12, May 21, 2013 (UTC)
Please check your spelling in the Bts.- Think I've fixed it now. Ayrehead02 (talk) 18:12, May 21, 2013 (UTC)
- Nice article. - Princess GLG 12:48, May 20, 2013 (UTC)
One more thing. I believe you need to use … at the end of the first line of the quote. (View this in source mode to see what I'm saying.)- Princess GLG 22:21, May 21, 2013 (UTC)- Changed. Thanks for reviewing! Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:04, May 22, 2013 (UTC)
I am fairly certain that you need a comma after "deception" and before "which" in the BTS.Fe Nite (talk) 01:51, May 24, 2013 (UTC)- Added. Ayrehead02 (talk) 18:36, May 26, 2013 (UTC)
Comments
- I'm not entirely sure how to treat the singular/plural problem and have put in the best solution I can think of however if I've done it wrong and need to change the article entirely to an individual I can. Ayrehead02 (talk) 21:21, May 19, 2013 (UTC)