Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Ferentina

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Ferentina

• Nominated by: Corellian Premier^{All along the watchtower} 14:25, September 22, 2010 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Kindly ignore the fact it was once named "Unidentified Naboo town"

(1 ECs/0 Users/1 Total)

Support

1. SoresuMakashi^{(Everything I tell you is the truth)} 02:08, October 18, 2010 (UTC)

Object

1. Soresu
   • Why is all that stuff in the intro about nearby landmarks not anywhere else? This could warrant a description section.
   • Furthermore, for the description, you could extrapolate some more info from the image. For example, it's bordered by a steep hill on one side, plus that... whatever it is... on the opposite side.
   • During the Invasion of Naboo in the year 32 BBY,[1] the Trade Federation Droid Army attacked Ferentina, which was serving as a refugee camp. The fact that it was a refugee camp needs to be directly established ie. When the Trade Federation invaded Naboo in 32 BBY, Feretina served as a refugee camp for the Naboo people.
   • the bridge. The? You haven't yet established which bridge you're talking about.
   • the survivors Survivors of what? Be specific.
   • Is it possible to get an image of the destroyed city? SoresuMakashi^{(Everything I tell you is a lie)} 00:26, October 10, 2010 (UTC)
     • ...I've proven again and again that the N64 version does not provide quality images. Maybe someone with the PC version could add one. Corellian Premier^{All along the watchtower} 14:24, October 15, 2010 (UTC)
     • Okay, I rewrote the article. You can check it out. Corellian Premier^{All along the watchtower} 14:24, October 15, 2010 (UTC)

Comments

I don't know whether or not turning these CAs into GAs is a positive or negative attribute. Corellian Premier^{All along the watchtower} 14:24, October 15, 2010 (UTC)