Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Everi Chalis's mother

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Everi Chalis's mother

• Nominated by: Braha'tok enthusiast ^{(Hello there)} 10:06, August 31, 2020 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:

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Support

1. Fan26 (Talk) 14:21, September 2, 2020 (UTC)
2. QuiGonJinn ^(Talk) 08:02, September 7, 2020 (UTC)
3. Zed42 (talk) 08:20, September 7, 2020 (UTC)

Object

Fan

• The first sentence is a bit of a run-on.
• There doesn't need to be a table of contents. Fan26 (Talk) 16:09, August 31, 2020 (UTC)
  • Both addressed. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{(Hello there)} 17:12, August 31, 2020 (UTC)

Zed

• "Human" is infobox-exclusive. Does the book actually establish her species directly?
  • Does not. Fixed.
• The date note currently doesn't mention anything about the Empire's rise to power for that 19 BBY date. Zed42 (talk) 20:22, September 5, 2020 (UTC)
  • Can I not reference the Empire's rise happening in 19 BBY to Galactic Atlas? Atlas says that the Palpatine declared himself the Emperor in 19 BBY. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{(Hello there)} 21:11, September 5, 2020 (UTC)
    • You can, but the date note specifically mentions the end of the Clone Wars. I think you should add the Empire's rise in there too just so it's clear. Zed42 (talk) 08:12, September 7, 2020 (UTC)
      • Ok done. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{(Hello there)} 08:16, September 7, 2020 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 08:07, September 9, 2020 (UTC)