- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a comprehensive article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
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Energizer
- Nominated by: Stake black msg 19:30, March 31, 2014 (UTC)
- Nomination comments:
(3 ECs/2 Users/5 Total)
Support
- Clone Commander Lee Talk 20:25, March 31, 2014 (UTC)
- Commander Code-8 Felicitations malefactors! 21:24, April 2, 2014 (UTC)
Well, after SE is done. Corellian PremierThe Force will be with you always 19:51, April 8, 2014 (UTC)
501st dogma(talk) 19:22, April 9, 2014 (UTC)
Supreme Emperor (talk) 04:52, April 11, 2014 (UTC)
Object
Lee's charge
destroyed the Imperial Garrison Base[1] in the Outer Rim planet: Should that be "on the Outer Rim planet"?ems of P-s4 twin ion engines used in certain spacecraft such as the TIE/LN starfighter, in use by the Galactic Empire: Could you vary the use of "use" here?Can we source the year to the comic?- Clone Commander Lee Talk 19:41, March 31, 2014 (UTC)
- Done. Stake black msg 19:59, March 31, 2014 (UTC)
Code-8
I don't think dealining is a real word, you use it in the infobox caption and in the body.Commander Code-8 Felicitations malefactors! 06:19, April 2, 2014 (UTC)- Good one. Stake black msg 13:23, April 2, 2014 (UTC)
501
204 words. :P501st dogma(talk) 22:19, April 7, 2014 (UTC)- I know it's not recommended, but I reworded it to fall short of 200 words (without removing actual content), because an intro here would be pointlessly repetitive. It only got this big because of the BtS section, which can't be summed up in an intro. Stake black msg 22:31, April 7, 2014 (UTC)
SE
"present spacecraft like the TIE/LN starfighter," I think you may be missing a word here.Can you add a bit more context on the explosion itself? The quote says it becomes a "time bomb" so maybe something about a delayed explosion?Supreme Emperor (talk) 14:03, April 8, 2014 (UTC)- How's that now? Stake black msg 03:51, April 9, 2014 (UTC)