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Endure

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  1. Good work :D -- YakovChaimTzvi ChissAscendancyCanonSymbol (talk) 16:30, 18 August 2021 (UTC)
  2. Liverpool92Ackbar HS 20:25, 26 August 2021 (UTC)
  3. Manoof (talk) 10:51, 28 August 2021 (UTC)
  4. ECvote JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 01:45, 1 September 2021 (UTC)
  5. ECvote Commander Code-8 Hello There! 02:29, 3 September 2021 (UTC)

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Macaroni
  • If Dooku teaches the technique to his Padawans, wouldn't that be in a flashback? JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 16:54, 18 August 2021 (UTC)
    • Yeah, fixed. LucaRoR (Talk) 19:18, 18 August 2021 (UTC)
  • Do we not have a more specific date for when Dooku taught the technique? JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 17:53, 20 August 2021 (UTC)
    • I thought it was clear enough, but I've added another date. LucaRoR (Talk) 07:13, 21 August 2021 (UTC)
  • Surely Dooku was not a master when he learned the technique, right? JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 04:03, 22 August 2021 (UTC)
    • It's not sure, it happened very often that Masters shared techniques even between them. What's sure is that he was a master when he taught it. LucaRoR (Talk) 06:11, 22 August 2021 (UTC)
      • Okay, I buy that it was possible, but it's currently written like you're 100% sure he was a master when he learned it. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 18:18, 23 August 2021 (UTC)
        • Is this better? LucaRoR (Talk) 18:57, 23 August 2021 (UTC)
  • Do we know for sure that he used the metal thing to teach the technique to both of his Padawans? If not, I'd like to see it specified which Padawan he taught it using the band. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 17:39, 25 August 2021 (UTC)
    • Done. Since YakovChaimTzvi has found a source that mentions the technique with an "official" name, I've moved the page and expanded the article with the new information. LucaRoR (Talk) 18:29, 25 August 2021 (UTC)
  • Star Wars: Force and Destiny needs to be mentioned in the bts.
  • I don't think Jedi Lost actually specifies that Crucitorn was the first guy to use it, does it?
  • Please avoide using the word "this" in the IU section.
  • The phrase "used by several Jedi" is used in both the body and bts. Please introduce some variation. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 18:23, 29 August 2021 (UTC)
    • All addressed! LucaRoR (Talk) 19:12, 29 August 2021 (UTC)
Spooky
  • I think the window for when Kostana taught the technique to Dooku can be shortened. In Flame-Wielders and Crucitorn, it is noted that pain endurance was taught to Qui-Gon by around 68 BBY, and so Dooku would have had to learn it from her before that to pass it on.
  • Given it only appears once, I think a bit more detail about how Dooku demonstrated pain endurance to Jinn could be added. There were some materials used, and a bit of the process shown in Jinn being able to sense his Master's pain, then it becoming not-sensable in the Force.—spookywillowwtalk 02:37, 19 August 2021 (UTC)
Manoof
  • The article reads like this is an exclusively LS/Jedi power, in which case the infobox needs to reflect and category should be Category:Light_side_powers. If not, please clarify. Manoof (talk) 05:44, 28 August 2021 (UTC)
    • There are only known Jedi that used it, this doesn't mean that perhaps other Force-users can't. I'd rather not specify it since it isn't sure. LucaRoR (Talk) 05:58, 28 August 2021 (UTC)
  • Infobox has an inventor field and you have a "first used by Crucitorn", so I think this should be completed accordingly. Manoof (talk) 05:44, 28 August 2021 (UTC)
    • It is: "The first known Jedi to use it was Jedi Master Crucitorn," it isn't confirmed that she was the first. LucaRoR (Talk) 05:58, 28 August 2021 (UTC)
      • Missed that reading whilst juggling the kids haha all good Manoof (talk) 10:51, 28 August 2021 (UTC)
  • Check linking carefully for double links (eg Jedi) or if there's any other links that can be added. Eg Death Manoof (talk) 05:44, 28 August 2021 (UTC)
    • Oh, done thanks! LucaRoR (Talk) 05:58, 28 August 2021 (UTC)
      • Good work! Manoof (talk) 10:51, 28 August 2021 (UTC)
CC-8
  • Did Dooku use the metal band on himself? I feel like that should be specified
  • The bts should specify that the appearance was in a flashback Commander Code-8 Hello There! 04:09, 1 September 2021 (UTC)
    • Both done! LucaRoR (Talk) 05:18, 1 September 2021 (UTC)
  • I don't think saying that many Jedi used the force power in the Bts is necessary. You can skip that and just a similar force power called Crucitorn was first mentioned in... Commander Code-8 Hello There! 05:17, 2 September 2021 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 02:29, 3 September 2021 (UTC)