Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Endor landscape painting (second nomination)

Nominated by: Manoof (he/him/his) ( talk ) 13:56, 5 November 2021 (UTC)
Nomination comments: Another Galaxies painting former CA
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Endor landscape painting

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~~The details in the quote showing Jhorn's feelings about the painting and Endor are relevant enough to put in the body~~ Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 02:16, 12 November 2021 (UTC)
- From my phone but hows that? Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 11:49, 12 November 2021 (UTC)
  - Good but I did some small rewording. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 01:52, 13 November 2021 (UTC)
~~A question rather than an objection but is Fort Bestine the actual place's title? It's confusing since that's not used in that article~~ Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 01:52, 13 November 2021 (UTC)
- I'm 99% sure it was but can't find anything concrete so have adjusted the language Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 12:13, 13 November 2021 (UTC)

~~Is it really necessary to list all of those pests?~~ JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 15:58, 17 November 2021 (UTC)
- I suppose not really, removed all but two for context (initial pest and the final pest) Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 08:52, 18 November 2021 (UTC)
  - ~~Check the capitalization there.~~ JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 02:25, 21 November 2021 (UTC)
    - Palm -> Face Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 11:14, 21 November 2021 (UTC)

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 05:35, 23 November 2021 (UTC)