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Endor landscape painting
- Nominated by: Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 13:56, 5 November 2021 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: Another Galaxies painting former CA
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Support
- YakovChaimTzvi (he/him/his)
(talk) 14:06, 5 November 2021 (UTC)
Commander Code-8 Hello There! 08:18, 17 November 2021 (UTC)
JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 02:52, 23 November 2021 (UTC)- DaRealDarkLord (talk) 20:54, 21 November 2021 (UTC)
- LucaRoR
(Talk) 05:32, 23 November 2021 (UTC)
Object
CC-8
The details in the quote showing Jhorn's feelings about the painting and Endor are relevant enough to put in the bodyCommander Code-8 Hello There! 02:16, 12 November 2021 (UTC)- From my phone but hows that? Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 11:49, 12 November 2021 (UTC)
- Good but I did some small rewording. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 01:52, 13 November 2021 (UTC)
- From my phone but hows that? Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 11:49, 12 November 2021 (UTC)
A question rather than an objection but is Fort Bestine the actual place's title? It's confusing since that's not used in that articleCommander Code-8 Hello There! 01:52, 13 November 2021 (UTC)
Macaroni
Is it really necessary to list all of those pests?JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 15:58, 17 November 2021 (UTC)- I suppose not really, removed all but two for context (initial pest and the final pest) Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 08:52, 18 November 2021 (UTC)
Check the capitalization there.JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 02:25, 21 November 2021 (UTC)
- I suppose not really, removed all but two for context (initial pest and the final pest) Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 08:52, 18 November 2021 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 05:35, 23 November 2021 (UTC)