Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Emple Ortok's apartment

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  • 1 Emple Ortok's apartment
    • 1.1 (3 ECs/0 Users/3 Total)
      • 1.1.1 Support
      • 1.1.2 Object
        • 1.1.2.1 Lew
      • 1.1.3 Comments

Emple Ortok's apartment

  • Nominated by: Chipchip88 (talk) 00:27, 16 November 2024 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:
  • Date Archived: 00:31, 18 November 2024 (UTC)
  • Final word count: 166 words (0 introduction, 105 body, 61 behind the scenes)
  • Word count at nomination time: 149 words (0 introduction, 105 body, 44 behind the scenes)
  • WookieeProject (optional): WP:THR

(3 ECs/0 Users/3 Total)

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Support

  1. ECvote Lewisr (talk) 03:57, 16 November 2024 (UTC)
  2. ECvote CometSmudge (talk) 17:54, 17 November 2024 (UTC)
  3. ECvote —spookywillowwtalk 00:31, 18 November 2024 (UTC)

Object

Lew
  • To be implemented on the public shipyard as well, but context for the Stormwall typically notes it's a hyperspace barrier (a bit more descriptive than just a barrier), though will need a change of source to something like the High Republic Character Encyclopedia for example Lewisr (talk) 00:52, 16 November 2024 (UTC)
  • The Phase should be mentioned on this and on the public shipyard Lewisr (talk) 00:52, 16 November 2024 (UTC)
    • Addressed Chipchip88 (talk) 01:26, 16 November 2024 (UTC)
      • I don't believe the Phase is directly citable to the story itself, is tothe chronological guide on SW.com Lewisr (talk) 02:12, 16 November 2024 (UTC)
        • Sourced to the Chronological Reader's Guide Chipchip88 (talk) 02:38, 16 November 2024 (UTC)
  • Since the name isn't conjectural you should rewrite it slightly to include the name Lewisr (talk) 03:26, 16 November 2024 (UTC)
  • As I did here, I think you can remove the constructed by date in the infobox for redundancy, and would also recommend applying the same BTS formatting for the insider issue Lewisr (talk) 03:26, 16 November 2024 (UTC)
    • Addressed Chipchip88 (talk) 03:36, 16 November 2024 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 00:31, 18 November 2024 (UTC)