Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/E-11 blaster pistol

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E-11 blaster pistol

(2 ECs/2 Users/4 Total)

Support

  1. Good job, now I really need to finish the work on my first nominations.--Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 16:30, July 27, 2011 (UTC)
  2. looks good <-Omicron(Leave a message at the BEEP!) 00:16, July 29, 2011 (UTC)
  3. ECvote ~SavageBOB sig 18:19, August 1, 2011 (UTC)
  4. ECvote Menkooroo 02:35, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

Object

  1. Exiled Jedi
  2. Bob
    • Like the other blaster noms you've got up, please state in the first sentence that the E-11 was a gun, a blaster, a weapon, something definitive.
      • Done.
    • E-11 redirects to E-11 blaster rifle. However, this article and several others (E-11 carbine, E-11 electroscope, E-11s sniper rifle) show that that's probably not the best situation. Although it's only peripheral to this nom, can you clear this up by changing E-11 to a disambiguation page for all these guns? You should then add a template to the top of the article pointing to the disambig.
      • Alrighty.
    • Can you describe Korr as a "former smuggler"? Do we know that he didn't wear an E-11 when he was still smuggling? Please be careful to word the nomination so we don't imply that he never used the gun when he was smuggling.
      • Try that.
    • Perhaps ID Korr as Human.
      • Got it.
    • Don't forget the "model" field in the infobox.
      • Got it.
    • Did he wear it in place of both blasters, or just one of them? It sounds odd if he wore it in place of two, since each would require its own holster. If you mean he carried it in place of the other two (meaning he only carried one E-11 whereas he usually carried two GH-44s), perhaps change to that. ~SavageBOB sig 14:26, July 28, 2011 (UTC)
  3. You should stick a [1] after the first couple of sentences --- right now, "The E-11 blaster pistol was a type of weapon used in the days of the Old Republic. After he had given up smuggling, the Human Zeerid Korr sometimes wore an E-11 blaster pistol in a single-sling holster under his jacket." is sourced to ref [2], the dating ref. Menkooroo 00:36, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

  1. I'd just like to point out that although all of these blaster articles that you have nominated do fit the def. of comprehensive article, the ones about the old republic are alikely to be mentioned in the up coming MMO game. While it is comprehensive now, it is likely not to be soon. I know you could make that case for any article, but I'd wait til the game comes out to nominate any Old republic articles. It would be better than nominating it now, then having to take it away later. Just a thought.—Unsigned comment by IthinkIwannaLeia (talk • contribs).
  • Does anyone know who wrote the above unsigned objection? We need to ID the person if this nomination is to pass. ~SavageBOB sig 18:20, August 1, 2011 (UTC)
    • Oh, I thought that you posted that, seeing how it was right underneath your other objections. Let me see if I can sort it out of the history mess. Cal JediInfinite Empire (Personal Comm Channel) 21:26, August 1, 2011 (UTC)
      • After a search through the page history, I found out it was this user. Cal JediInfinite Empire (Personal Comm Channel) 21:35, August 1, 2011 (UTC)
        • I left a note on his talk page to please revisit the note, but no response. I'm using my EC hat to move the comment down here, since it's not really an objection. If this somehow breaks protocol, someone please revert me. ~SavageBOB sig 16:39, August 7, 2011 (UTC)
          • I think you were within your right based on here: "Additionally, CAN objections can be struck by an EduCorps member (as well as by any admin) if they do not fall under one of the rules. No vote is required." Menkooroo 00:29, August 8, 2011 (UTC)