Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Dybbuk

The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a Comprehensive article nomination that was unsuccessful. Please do not modify it.

Dybbuk

• Nominated by: Marvacian Archivist (talk) 13:13, 22 July 2024 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:
• Date Archived: 19:34, 23 August 2024 (UTC)
• Final word count: 185 words (0 introduction, 146 body, 39 behind the scenes)
• Word count at nomination time: 101 words (0 introduction, 81 body, 20 behind the scenes)
• WookieeProject (optional):

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(Votes required: 2 EC vote(s) required to reach minimum. Additional 3 user or 1 EC vote required to pass.)

Support

Object

Ayrehead

• You'll need to describe the physical appearance of the dybbuk in the body, including its flesh color and height which are currently infobox exclusive. I'd imagine there's also description in the audio description. Ayrehead02 (talk) 13:26, 22 July 2024 (UTC)
  • Adressed. Marvacian Archivist (talk) 14:34, 22 July 2024 (UTC)
    • You still need a description of what it looks like in terms of the shape of its body. Ayrehead02 (talk) 14:44, 22 July 2024 (UTC)
      • Done. Marvacian Archivist (talk) 14:59, 22 July 2024 (UTC)
        • The audio description explicitly describes it as a shaped like a smooth four armed starfish which needs to be included. Ayrehead02 (talk) 08:21, 11 August 2024 (UTC)
• I think you can go into more detail about the events of the episode. You can specify that the prisoner effected by it is human and that the prison ship is a Republic one heading for Coruscant since all of that's relevant to the dybbuk's use. I'd also included how the dybbuck reacted to the shock from Pip and the fact that the ship crashed since that's relevant to the fate of that individual dybbuk. Ayrehead02 (talk) 13:26, 22 July 2024 (UTC)
  • Adressed. Marvacian Archivist (talk) 14:33, 22 July 2024 (UTC)
• Further detail that needs adding from the audio description and subtitles: The convict is barely concious but groaning while masked by the dybbuk which throbbed as his head lolled around. Ayrehead02 (talk) 08:21, 11 August 2024 (UTC)
• You should mention that Osha and the other convicts discuss the dybbuk and what the other convicts have to say about the creature. Ayrehead02 (talk) 08:21, 11 August 2024 (UTC)
• When Osha shocks the dybbuk it actually flaps its limbs and flies across the room, which is confirmed as flight by the audio description, so this needs to be covered and the fact it crawls away into the vent should be mentioned as well. Ayrehead02 (talk) 08:21, 11 August 2024 (UTC)

Lew

• Coruscant being the galactic capital and Carlac being a planet isn't citable to the episode Lewisr (talk) 02:03, 23 July 2024 (UTC)
  • Done. Marvacian Archivist (talk) 07:23, 23 July 2024 (UTC)

Comments

Vote to remove nomination (EC only)

1. Objections for Ayre unaddressed for 12 days Lewisr (talk) 19:30, 23 August 2024 (UTC)
2. Sanathestarr (talk) 19:31, 23 August 2024 (UTC)
3. —spookywilloww^talk 19:33, 23 August 2024 (UTC)