Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Dragigan Annals

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Dragigan Annals

  • Nominated by: Lewisr (talk) 02:31, 14 May 2023 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:
  • Date Archived: 22:52, 28 May 2023 (UTC)
  • Final word count: 154 words (0 introduction, 121 body, 33 behind the scenes)
  • WookieeProject (optional): WP:THR

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Support

  1. ThrawnChiss7 Mitth symbol Assembly Cupola 20:37, 17 May 2023 (UTC)
  2. ECvote Commander Code-8 Hello There! 11:02, 24 May 2023 (UTC)
  3. ECvote Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 13:39, 25 May 2023 (UTC)
  4. ECvote JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 22:33, 28 May 2023 (UTC)

Object

Thrawn
  • The only mention I'm finding of the Annals is on page 39 of Path of Vengeance, which does not establish them as a structure, just a location. Is there another mention or are the Annals just a location instead of a structure? ThrawnChiss7 Mitth symbol Assembly Cupola 01:24, 17 May 2023 (UTC)
    • Yana later states 'We had to turn over a dozen shrines before we hit the jackpot', so I added it was a shrine Lewisr (talk) 01:35, 17 May 2023 (UTC)
CC-8
  • Is the "without question" part referring to the level of control over the Leveler? Not sure how it's necessary if so. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 10:56, 19 May 2023 (UTC)
    • Yeah it is. It's relevant to why they were searching for the rod so I thought it was worth including Lewisr (talk) 13:02, 19 May 2023 (UTC)
      • It's already stated that they would have full control over the Leveler, so adding the without question part comes across as redundant. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 08:23, 22 May 2023 (UTC)
        • I think it's needed to show that the Leveler is forced to act completely under the control of the one who wields the combined rods, hence why Elecia sought the second rod out. A couple relevant pieces from the book 'The Rod of Daybreak was a legendary relic that, when combined with the Rod of Seasons—already liberated by Yana from the Hynestian royal family—could control the Leveler fully and without question.' and 'Do you see, Yana, how important this is? The Rod of Seasons alone helped control the animal, but with both rods, we can dominate it completely.' Lewisr (talk) 14:40, 22 May 2023 (UTC)
Braha
  • The layers of context you've put in the first sentence has made it a run on. Please revise that. Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 20:39, 20 May 2023 (UTC)
    • How's that? Lewisr (talk) 21:49, 20 May 2023 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 22:33, 28 May 2023 (UTC)