Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Dov

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Dov

• Nominated by: Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 22:04, March 11, 2014 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Planned for four years....

(5 ECs/2 Users/7 Total)

Support

1. Ayrehead02 (talk) 17:18, March 13, 2014 (UTC)
2. Ah Dov, we hardly knew ye. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 02:09, March 14, 2014 (UTC)
3. Manoof (talk) 02:50, March 17, 2014 (UTC)
4. Supreme Emperor (talk) 04:57, March 24, 2014 (UTC)
5. 501st dogma^(talk) 01:36, March 25, 2014 (UTC)
6. Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 17:03, April 10, 2014 (UTC)
7. --Dionne Jinn (Something to say?) 04:19, April 11, 2014 (UTC)

Object

A force user

1. There needs to be some sort of mention of his birth year, otherwise the death date in the infobox is a bit incongruous. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 21:41, March 13, 2014 (UTC)
   • Better? Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 22:08, March 13, 2014 (UTC)
2. Is that quote correct? It seems a bit off. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 21:41, March 13, 2014 (UTC)
   • Yes, it's thought by Skirata. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 22:08, March 13, 2014 (UTC)

SE

• Can you reword the last sentence a bit to say he was the same height as the clone template, Jango Fett?
  • Addressed. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 11:58, March 20, 2014 (UTC)
• Can you add the release month to the bts? Supreme Emperor (talk) 02:26, March 20, 2014 (UTC)
  • Added. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 11:58, March 20, 2014 (UTC)

Exiled Jedi

• Can the dates be directly sourced to the novel?--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 05:10, March 24, 2014 (UTC)
  • Yes and no, have a look. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 12:03, March 24, 2014 (UTC)
    • Hmmm, I think you will need to add a reference explaining why the date is valid. The way it currently is referenced doesn't really explained everything.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 14:54, April 2, 2014 (UTC)
      • Have a look. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 21:55, April 2, 2014 (UTC)
• One last objection, I'm not sure you can say that Dov was 1.83 meters tall. He might not have reached maturity by the time he died.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 14:51, April 7, 2014 (UTC)
  • Fair enough, although for weapon training....nah, not really to say when they were trained and at which point they reached this height. Removed. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 20:15, April 7, 2014 (UTC)

501st

• You need to mention his species in the body.
  • Eh, it is. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 01:00, March 25, 2014 (UTC)
• The Galactic Republic should be linked to in the body as well. 501st dogma^(talk) 00:58, March 25, 2014 (UTC)
  • Added. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 01:00, March 25, 2014 (UTC)

Dionne Jinn

• Does Manda mean Manda or manda? Currently the link takes to the article about the planet, not religious concept.--Dionne Jinn (Something to say?) 05:05, April 10, 2014 (UTC)
  • Very good catch, fixed. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 13:53, April 10, 2014 (UTC)

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