Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Double viol

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Double viol

  • Nominated by: CometSmudge (talk) 00:13, 12 April 2024 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:
  • Date Archived: 23:16, 14 April 2024 (UTC)
  • Final word count: 201 words (0 introduction, 75 body, 126 behind the scenes)
  • Word count at nomination time: 193 words (0 introduction, 76 body, 117 behind the scenes)
  • WookieeProject (optional): WP:THR WP:NOVELS

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Support

  1. ECvote TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 20:15, 12 April 2024 (UTC)
  2. ECvote copy-edit —spookywillowwtalk 23:04, 14 April 2024 (UTC)
  3. ECvote Lewisr (talk) 23:07, 14 April 2024 (UTC)

Object

spookly
  • Should split that first sentence so that a second one starts with 'Around 396 BBY' to prevent run-on.
  • For novels, we don't list publishers, so the Bantam Spectra bit can be trimmed out.
  • Will need to slide in the release month for the Adventure Journal (no extra ref needed, it's considered self-sourcing). It also may be optimal to format it similarly to here, in that it can be "fifteenth issue of the Star Wars Adventure Journal " because that allows for linking both the issue and series.
  • In Legends, is the viol first pictured in either Dark Apprentice or "Firestorm"? If so, it should note which. If not though, it'll need to have its first pictured information added to the BtS.—spookywillowwtalk 18:33, 14 April 2024 (UTC)

Comments

  • Nice work on this! There were only a few formatting issues that I've fixed in my copy-edit, so here are some reviewing notes for your future nominations (which I'm looking forward to!)
    • Per the Manual of Style, unnecessary pipelinks should be avoided when they do not point to a different title from the term being linked ([[music]]al instead of [[Music|musical]])
    • Also per MoS, image captions should receive a period (full stop) only when they constitute full sentences, which is not the case for the Behind the scenes image's caption.
    • Lastly, references should go immediately after punctuation marks such as commas. TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 20:15, 12 April 2024 (UTC)

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 23:15, 14 April 2024 (UTC)