Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Devidia Vennsiol's father

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Devidia Vennsiol's father

• Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 20:45, August 10, 2013 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:Reminds me of Veruca Salt's father

(4 ECs/0 Users/4 Total)

Support

1. Veruca Salt went to military school? Commander Code-8 ^{You lost the game!} 22:55, August 10, 2013 (UTC)
2. Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 14:20, August 12, 2013 (UTC)
3. It's all the dad's fault. 501st dogma^(talk) 00:27, August 19, 2013 (UTC)
4. OLIOSTER ^(talk) 19:55, September 1, 2013 (UTC)

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1. Exiled Jedi
   • This article also needs a reference to the era in the body.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 02:04, August 12, 2013 (UTC)
   • The military school article makes it sound like she did the majority of her charming of men there, while this article says that she started before, which I guess would be before she was a teenager? This seems kind of odd to me.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 02:08, August 12, 2013 (UTC)
     • Oops, I misread the school article, but the part about here being sent to military school when she became a teenager makes the charming of men still seem rather odd. Is there any explanation in the source?--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 02:10, August 12, 2013 (UTC)
       • Changed it to boys which what the article says and just as a teenager not as soon as she became one. Slightly less creepy now? :P Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:37, August 12, 2013 (UTC)
         • Yeah, much better.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 14:20, August 12, 2013 (UTC)

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