Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Dec

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Dec

• Nominated by: Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 00:08, April 4, 2014 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Clone commando and Mommy's boy

(4 ECs/1 Users/5 Total)

Support

1. Commander Code-8 ^{Felicitations malefactors!} 02:38, April 5, 2014 (UTC)
2. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 02:05, April 10, 2014 (UTC)
3. Please note that I removed the link to Etain in the quote, as you already link to her in the body. 501st dogma^(talk) 20:24, April 10, 2014 (UTC)
4. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:30, April 13, 2014 (UTC)
5. Supreme Emperor (talk) 06:19, April 15, 2014 (UTC)

Object

Code-8

• You've missed out on mentioning and linking to Jango Fett.
  • Added. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 09:07, April 4, 2014 (UTC)
• Should mention that he encouraged the Jedi to eat as it appears to be shown in the quote. Also, what's skraan and should it have an article? Commander Code-8 ^{Felicitations malefactors!} 06:46, April 4, 2014 (UTC)
  • Added a mention, skraan is a Mandalorian word for food I believe. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 09:07, April 4, 2014 (UTC)

Master of the universe

• I find that the second sentence is a tad messy. It runs on, and is "Vec" a mispelling? Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 20:19, April 8, 2014 (UTC)
  • Adressed. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 20:33, April 8, 2014 (UTC)
    • Much better, thanks. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 02:05, April 10, 2014 (UTC)

SE

• "The Jedi noted that Dec and his squadmates" Can you reword a little bit? Saying The Jedi makes it sound like all Jedi noted it, rather than just Tur-Mukan.
  • Better? Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 11:13, April 9, 2014 (UTC)
• Can you give a bit of context on the Special Operations Brigade? Supreme Emperor (talk) 03:25, April 9, 2014 (UTC)
  • Added a bit, but any more info would be redundant. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 11:13, April 9, 2014 (UTC)

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