Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Dav and Webb Taffral's mother

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Dav and Webb Taffral's mother

• Nominated by: —spookywilloww^talk 00:44, September 8, 2019 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:

(3 ECs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

1. Fan26 (Talk) 13:55, September 8, 2019 (UTC)
2. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 23:28, September 8, 2019 (UTC)
3. Zed42 (talk) 02:23, September 9, 2019 (UTC)
4. I've reworded the sentence to remove repetition. Let me know if you have an issues with it. Ayrehead02 (talk) 01:51, September 13, 2019 (UTC)
5. --DarthRuiz30 (talk) 20:40, September 13, 2019 (UTC)

Object

Toprawa

• In the interest of encyclopedic formality, this article title should avoid the ampersand and use the word and. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 21:15, September 9, 2019 (UTC)
  • Moved.—spookywilloww^talk 21:33, September 9, 2019 (UTC)

Ayrehead

• I think what's said in the quote could be detailed more in the body since the dad says he hadn't planned on having a partner before she came along. Ayrehead02 (talk) 14:20, September 12, 2019 (UTC)
  • Added a line.—spookywilloww^talk 18:56, September 12, 2019 (UTC)
    • The chronology of your first few sentences doesn't quite make sense. Since you mention having children first, you need to change the second sentence to be something like, prior to meeting her... or something similar. Ayrehead02 (talk) 23:47, September 12, 2019 (UTC)
      • Does that work? —spookywilloww^talk 00:29, September 13, 2019 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 00:58, September 15, 2019 (UTC)