Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Darth Maladi's father (second nomination)

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Darth Maladi's father (second nomination)

• Nominated by: Dentface (talk) 23:06, 2 November 2021 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:
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Support

1. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 04:11, 10 November 2021 (UTC)
2. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 10:54, 23 November 2021 (UTC)
3. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 12:50, 23 November 2021 (UTC)
4. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 13:39, 23 November 2021 (UTC)
5. OOM 224 22:37, 24 November 2021 (UTC)

Object

Luca

• The fact that he owned a lightsaber should most likely be documented. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 18:50, 10 November 2021 (UTC)
  • Done. Dentface (talk) 00:08, 11 November 2021 (UTC)

CC-8

• Only one word in the first sentence needs to be bolded, I'd pick Devaronian.
  • Now Gender/Legends has to be linked earlier
    • Done. Dentface (talk) 00:27, 15 November 2021 (UTC)
• Unless we have some very specific information about the illustration we can't claim that those three illustrators contributed to drawing this character. It's more accurate just to say that the comic was illustrated by those three.
• Reproduction/Legends can be linked the first time the word daughter is used.
• The issue number of Legacy 45 should be given in the Bts
• The date reference note should hide the year from the comic link and should specify that it was the Sith who killed Maladi's parents Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 10:44, 11 November 2021 (UTC)
  • All of the above is done, except one thing. Could you clarify what you mean by "hide the year from the comic link." Aren't we supposed to leave the year in the parenthetical with the new policy? Dentface (talk) 03:16, 12 November 2021 (UTC)
    • Got me there, I personally dislike the look of it but didn't realize it went against policy. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 01:31, 13 November 2021 (UTC)
• The date note needs to link Parents and Death
• "Taken by the Darth Krayt" needs to be reworded
• John Ostrander doesn't need to be specified as the creator of the Legacy series in the Bts, and you can probably merge the first two sentences of the Bts
• I had a skim through the comic and Maladi specifies that she was born on Devaron to a rare Devaronian Jedi, which can be noted. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 01:31, 13 November 2021 (UTC)
  • Done. Dentface (talk) 21:45, 14 November 2021 (UTC)
• The comic also does not confirm that this character was married to a female Devaronian, so all of that needs to be removed
• Make sure you watch your linking when adding new info, species can now be linked in an earlier spot. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 08:17, 17 November 2021 (UTC)
  • Done. Dentface (talk) 02:55, 18 November 2021 (UTC)
• Last couple of things: You've written that the Jedi served before the Sith-Imperial war, but I don't think we can guarantee that based on the comic.
• The comic specifies that Maladi was born on Devaron so that can be added. Another source will be needed to indicate that its a planet Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 00:30, 20 November 2021 (UTC)
  • Done. Dentface (talk) 00:39, 21 November 2021 (UTC)

OOM

• The Darth/Legends link should be moved further up the article
• All info within the date ref must be clearly sourced as well OOM 224 17:55, 23 November 2021 (UTC)
  • Done. Dentface (talk) 22:34, 24 November 2021 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 22:37, 24 November 2021 (UTC)