- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a comprehensive article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
Daranas
- Nominated by: Clone Commander Lee Talk 11:04, January 15, 2012 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: Finishing MedStar II
(1 ECs/3 Users/4 Total)
Support
- ---501st Dogma
(Comlink) 13:39, January 15, 2012 (UTC) - —NAYAYEN is back! 16:05, January 16, 2012 (UTC)
—Cal Jedi(Personal Comm Channel) 23:46, January 17, 2012 (UTC)
- Tinwe(comlink) 14:07, January 20, 2012 (UTC)
Object
- 501st
The only problem I can see is that you do not mention that Daranas is female in the body, while it is one of the categories on the page.---501st Dogma
(Comlink) 13:16, January 15, 2012 (UTC)
- Good catch. Adressed. Clone Commander Lee Talk 13:21, January 15, 2012 (UTC)
Is there a link for the battle Offee was anticipating? I can't remember the plot of the Medstar novels :P—NAYAYEN is back! 13:32, January 16, 2012 (UTC)- There is no link for that special attack, so I linked it to the overall Battle of Drongar. Clone Commander Lee Talk 14:08, January 16, 2012 (UTC)
- Tinwe
Currently, "seer" links to a Yuuzhan Vong rank. Should a more general seer article be created?- Linked and created. Clone Commander Lee Talk 14:05, January 19, 2012 (UTC)
The Clone Wars, or at least the year of the Battle of Drongar, should be mentioned.- Added the year. Clone Commander Lee Talk 14:05, January 19, 2012 (UTC)
Seems like Daranas is based on Cassandra from Greek mythology. Mentioning the similarities in Bts would be a nice addition.Tinwe(comlink) 10:15, January 19, 2012 (UTC)- Yes, indeed. But AFAIK we are not allowed to include such info as long as it is not stated in a canon source that he has something to with real-life things. Thanks for the review. Clone Commander Lee Talk 14:05, January 19, 2012 (UTC)
- Per this CT, you can mention the similarity as long as no direct connection is stated. Tinwe(comlink) 14:20, January 19, 2012 (UTC)
- Ah, thanks. Added the info, feel free to tweak it if you like. Clone Commander Lee Talk 16:10, January 19, 2012 (UTC)
- Sorry to barge in and make life more difficult for you, but I think you should find a source for that statement.—Cal Jedi
(Personal Comm Channel) 16:14, January 19, 2012 (UTC)
- This is a big problem indeed. I could source it to wikipedia or some sort of book (non-SW), but that would make it difficult to check for others. Therefore I thought it would be better to leave it out. However, if such an statement is required, I'm glad for any help with the sourcing problem. Clone Commander Lee Talk 16:16, January 19, 2012 (UTC)
- IIRC, I've seen other users do a Cite web in this type of instance, and source it to a reliable website. I'd suggest perhaps doing a Google search of this person and seeing what you can find.—Cal Jedi
(Personal Comm Channel) 16:23, January 19, 2012 (UTC)
- Thanks for the idea. Did it that way. Clone Commander Lee Talk 13:31, January 20, 2012 (UTC)
- IIRC, I've seen other users do a Cite web in this type of instance, and source it to a reliable website. I'd suggest perhaps doing a Google search of this person and seeing what you can find.—Cal Jedi
- This is a big problem indeed. I could source it to wikipedia or some sort of book (non-SW), but that would make it difficult to check for others. Therefore I thought it would be better to leave it out. However, if such an statement is required, I'm glad for any help with the sourcing problem. Clone Commander Lee Talk 16:16, January 19, 2012 (UTC)
- Sorry to barge in and make life more difficult for you, but I think you should find a source for that statement.—Cal Jedi
- Ah, thanks. Added the info, feel free to tweak it if you like. Clone Commander Lee Talk 16:10, January 19, 2012 (UTC)
- Per this CT, you can mention the similarity as long as no direct connection is stated. Tinwe(comlink) 14:20, January 19, 2012 (UTC)
- Yes, indeed. But AFAIK we are not allowed to include such info as long as it is not stated in a canon source that he has something to with real-life things. Thanks for the review. Clone Commander Lee Talk 14:05, January 19, 2012 (UTC)
Comments
- I noticed you linked Alderaan for Alderaanian. There is a link for Alderaanian if you want to change it. Corellian Premier
All along the watchtower 15:12, January 15, 2012 (UTC)
- Thanks, I changed it. Clone Commander Lee Talk 15:18, January 15, 2012 (UTC)