Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Crystalplas

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Crystalplas

• Nominated by: - Princess GLG 15:56, January 24, 2015 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Another small nom from SBS.

(3 ECs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

1. 501st dogma^(talk) 19:41, January 24, 2015 (UTC)
2. Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:58, January 28, 2015 (UTC)
3. A good article, easy to read, well-written, good job.--Emperor Jarjarkine Senate Hall 12:11, January 29, 2015 (UTC)
4. Great work! Manoof (talk) 08:31, February 1, 2015 (UTC)
5. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 15:10, February 11, 2015 (UTC)

Object

501st

• 27 ABY in the body can't be sourced to Star by Star, as that date is never mentioned in the book. You'll have to use the Reader's Companion instead.
  • Done.
• How about some eras for the infobox? 501st dogma^(talk) 18:35, January 24, 2015 (UTC)
  • Added, I had to miss something obvious. I add the era for Tattooine Ghost even though it was only mentioned in it? - Princess GLG 19:07, January 24, 2015 (UTC)
    • Yes, as the crystalplas would have had to exist at that time to be mentioned. 501st dogma^(talk) 19:41, January 24, 2015 (UTC)

A Force user

• The second sentence seems to have a bit of a run-on going. And the third sentence, beginning with "these galleries were left intact" seems a bit off. Maybe combine some of the words into a single verb? Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 01:41, January 25, 2015 (UTC)
  • Better? - Princess GLG 04:31, January 25, 2015 (UTC)
    • Much. Sorry for the delay. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 15:10, February 11, 2015 (UTC)

Ayrehead

• Is there someway you could work in the Tatooine Ghost mention? It could even work as a BTS quote in my opinion. Ayrehead02 (talk) 14:35, January 27, 2015 (UTC)
  • Um, I'm not sure exactly, how would you suggest doing that? - Princess GLG 03:54, January 28, 2015 (UTC)
    • Looking at it again, I guess it doesn't really give any information. Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:58, January 28, 2015 (UTC)

Manoof

• Is it ever mentioned why the Vong left the galleries alone? Manoof (talk) 02:45, January 28, 2015 (UTC)
  • Some related articles here state that the museum was to use for information but I haven't found where it specifies that in SBS. - Princess GLG 03:54, January 28, 2015 (UTC)
    • I got in contect via IRC with Supreme Emperor and he's said they kept it to understand their enemies and it was used as Tsavong La's personal base of operations. Just make a brief mention of why it was kept and you're good to go :) (I'll sort out the museum's article page) Manoof (talk) 05:22, January 28, 2015 (UTC)
      • Ok, thank you. Added. - Princess GLG 13:30, January 28, 2015 (UTC)
        • I fixed a bit of the grammar up for you. You now have the same issue with referencing, as that information is sourced to Star by Star. Since SBS doesn't tell us why, you'll have to source the last sentence to the complete star wars encyclopedia (which is where SE got it from). Almost done! :D Manoof (talk) 05:46, January 29, 2015 (UTC)
          • Ok, I didn't realize that he found the info in the CSWE. Should I ask him where in the Encyclopedia it is so I can cite it more specifically using the template? - Princess GLG 14:45, January 29, 2015 (UTC)
            • Yes, shoot him a message on his talk page or get in contact on IRC, he tends to hang out on there :) Manoof (talk) 09:15, January 30, 2015 (UTC)
              • I've got it for you: Volume II, the specific entry is Museum of Applied Photonics. Trip391 (talk) 09:41, January 30, 2015 (UTC)
                • OK, thank you. Added. - Princess GLG 14:14, January 31, 2015 (UTC)

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