Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Cry of the Broken King

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Cry of the Broken King

  • Nominated by: DarthSkyll (talk) 19:35, 7 May 2023 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:
  • Date Archived: 11:01, 24 May 2023 (UTC)
  • Final word count: 202 words (0 introduction, 149 body, 53 behind the scenes)
  • WookieeProject (optional): WP:THR

(3 ECs/1 Users/4 Total)

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Support

  1. ECvote Welcome to the CAN! Ayrehead02 (talk) 07:24, 19 May 2023 (UTC)
  2. ECvote Fan26 (Talk) 21:23, 20 May 2023 (UTC)
  3. AmazinglyCool Nightsisters symbol - JFO (talk) 22:17, 23 May 2023 (UTC)
  4. ECvote Commander Code-8 Hello There! 10:57, 24 May 2023 (UTC)

Object

Fan
  • (Review note) Welcome to the CAN!
  • First off, general precedent puts images on the right side of the page, not the left Fan26 (Talk) 19:38, 7 May 2023 (UTC)
    • Thanks for the information, I updated it DarthSkyll (talk) 19:47, 7 May 2023 (UTC)
  • If we're contextualising Mac as a Jedi then the Sephi's occupation should be given too Fan26 (Talk) 19:23, 10 May 2023 (UTC)
    • I added that Tey Sirrek is a thief and for consistency I also added that Vildar Mac is a Kiffar. DarthSkyll (talk) 10:31, 11 May 2023 (UTC)
      • I think it'd be good to identify Mac as a Kiffar immediately upon introduction too Fan26 (Talk) 14:17, 12 May 2023 (UTC)
        • Done DarthSkyll (talk) 15:17, 12 May 2023 (UTC)
          • Sorry, shouldn't have let this sit for over a week. Fan26 (Talk) 21:23, 20 May 2023 (UTC)
Ziara
  • review note: welcome to the CAN!
  • you can implement the {{Force power}} infobox. doing so will mean you have to remove the image as well
    • ignore this, didnt realize that all the fields would be empty haha. sorry! BloodOfIrizi Seventh Fleet (Syndicure) 19:54, 7 May 2023 (UTC)
  • the release date in the BTS cant be sourced to the issue itself, you can use Marvel.com as a ref though (see the release date and its ref on the article for the issue)
  • in most instances we refer to characters by their last names - Sirrek and Mac as opposed to Tey anf Vildar
  • the last sentence is a bit of a run-on, try splitting it
  • since the article subject is only mentioned in one issue, you can lose the "first mentioned" in the BTS and leave it as "was mentioned in..." BloodOfIrizi Seventh Fleet (Syndicure) 19:50, 7 May 2023 (UTC)
    • I fixed the BTS and the last sentence part. Referring to the two characters by their last names feels a bit off since in the comics they are almost always referred to by their first names. That was at least the thought behind that decision. Nevertheless I can fix it if that's not reason enaugh to refer to them by their last names. DarthSkyll (talk) 21:10, 7 May 2023 (UTC)
      • yeah, since the Wook is an encyclopedia, we refer to characters by their last names in most cases, since its more formal. BloodOfIrizi Seventh Fleet (Syndicure) 22:21, 7 May 2023 (UTC)
CC-8
  • The {{Force power}} template can actually be used as Jedi can be listed in the affiliations. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 10:38, 19 May 2023 (UTC)
    • Could you please tell me how you came to the conclusion that the Jedi are affiliated with this force power? Thanks. DarthSkyll (talk) 12:11, 19 May 2023 (UTC)
      • The fact that a Jedi uses it seems sufficient. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 08:21, 22 May 2023 (UTC)
        • But a Jedi doesn't use it. It's only mentioned by a former Guardian of the Whills. It's even unknown if the force power actually exists or if Tey Sirrek made it up. DarthSkyll (talk) 13:00, 22 May 2023 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 10:57, 24 May 2023 (UTC)