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Creator
- Nominated by: Editoronthewiki (talk) 19:23, 30 May 2022 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: I've had this sitting as a red-link in my next nom list, finally time to do it, project Catalyst continues!
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Commander Code-8 Hello There! 09:34, 2 June 2022 (UTC)- Project Catalyst? 👀 Samonic
20:34, 3 June 2022 (UTC) - Fan26 (Talk) 12:54, 9 June 2022 (UTC)
Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 12:23, 16 June 2022 (UTC)- Ayrehead02 (talk) 17:50, 22 June 2022 (UTC)
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Ayrehead
I think it's good practice to mention the language that a translated quote is original spoken in in the body of an article if it can be worked in naturally. This can help provide context for the subject, especially since the only mention of the Creator is via a translation. Since you speak about the proclamation it should be easy to add.Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:26, 10 June 2022 (UTC)- Thoughts? Editoronthewiki (talk) 13:35, 15 June 2022 (UTC)
Manoof
"Stating it ensured"—can you specify what "it" is here. Based on the article, "it" could be that poggle was blessed by the Creator or that he returned in time for the holiday. From the quote, "it" is the fact they have their own corner of the galaxy. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 11:03, 13 June 2022 (UTC)- Better? Editoronthewiki (talk) 13:38, 15 June 2022 (UTC)
Comments
- Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 17:50, 22 June 2022 (UTC)