Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Crab creature

The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a comprehensive article nomination that was unsuccessful. Please do not modify it.

Crab creature

• Nominated by: Clonehunter^{(Report your W.M.D.)} 04:04, January 26, 2014 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: For the Barn-Burner on Creatures.

(2 ECs/0 Users/2 Total)

Support

1. Ayrehead02 (talk) 13:11, January 30, 2014 (UTC)
2. 501st dogma^(talk) 21:27, February 6, 2014 (UTC)

Object

1. Ayrehead
   • Some of the body sounds a bit informal, could you change "from other bits of dangerous wildlife". Ayrehead02 (talk) 21:40, January 28, 2014 (UTC)
     • Fixed --Clonehunter^{(Report your W.M.D.)} 23:38, January 29, 2014 (UTC)
   • Could you mention four of its eyes were on stalks. Ayrehead02 (talk) 21:40, January 28, 2014 (UTC)
     • Fixed --Clonehunter^{(Report your W.M.D.)} 23:38, January 29, 2014 (UTC)
   • Could you mention that it was under one meter in the body. Ayrehead02 (talk) 21:40, January 28, 2014 (UTC)
     • Fixed --Clonehunter^{(Report your W.M.D.)} 23:38, January 29, 2014 (UTC)
2. 501st
   • You need to mention its sentience in the body.
     • Done
   • Same with eye color.
     • Done
   • Same with it being carnivorous. 501st dogma^(talk) 00:41, February 3, 2014 (UTC)
     • I just removed this, actually, because while it intimidated our heroes, it didn't explicitly try to eat them. Various animals have intimidation tactics for defense. --Clonehunter^{(Report your W.M.D.)} 14:50, February 6, 2014 (UTC)

Exiled Jedi

• I don't think you can source the Clone Wars start date to the comic.
  • New source then. --Clonehunter^{(Report your W.M.D.)} 04:10, February 20, 2014 (UTC)
• You still list meat in the diet section of the infobox.
  • Fixed
• It looks to be more of a dark orange color to me.
  • It changes in saturation depending on my monitor, as I got some scans from the book. Unless you're looking at a hard copy of the book.
    • Ok.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 16:35, February 12, 2014 (UTC)
      • Actually, going back, it does seem more orange, though I don't know how specific I can state, again because of monitor issues. You were right. :) --Clonehunter^{(Report your W.M.D.)} 15:11, February 13, 2014 (UTC)
• I would give more detail on the eight eyes on the front of its body. For instance, the outside eyes of them are smaller than the others.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 04:38, February 9, 2014 (UTC)
  • I made a reference, should I go into more detail? Also, should I start sectioning this? I think it's over 200. --Clonehunter^{(Report your W.M.D.)} 16:28, February 12, 2014 (UTC)
    • I think that should do it for the eyes, and yes, please section the article.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 16:35, February 12, 2014 (UTC)
      • Sectioned, then. --Clonehunter^{(Report your W.M.D.)} 22:08, February 16, 2014 (UTC)
• At 350 words, I this article should be taken to the GAN page. I'll archive it now if you want me to.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 18:06, February 20, 2014 (UTC)
  • Eyup. --Clonehunter^{(Report your W.M.D.)} 18:22, February 20, 2014 (UTC)

SE

• Can we get a bit more context on the Clone Wars?
  • How does that work?
    • Can you refer to it as a war initially, rather than an event?
      • Done --Clonehunter^{(Report your W.M.D.)} 04:10, February 20, 2014 (UTC)
• Can you add a release date for the comic? Supreme Emperor (talk) 07:06, February 11, 2014 (UTC)
  • Added. --Clonehunter^{(Report your W.M.D.)} 22:08, February 16, 2014 (UTC)
• Links to the other dangerous wildlife? Supreme Emperor (talk) 06:22, February 18, 2014 (UTC)
  • Linked to two of them using the words that would be appropriate. --Clonehunter^{(Report your W.M.D.)} 18:02, February 20, 2014 (UTC)

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