Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Citypath 515

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Citypath 515

  • Nominated by: 501st dogma(talk) 15:40, March 13, 2013 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: My first nomination for the new voting amount

(3 ECs/3 Users/6 Total)

Support

  1. ECvote—Jedi Kasra ("Indeed.") 05:15, March 14, 2013 (UTC)
  2. — DigiFluid(Whine here) 18:00, March 14, 2013 (UTC)
  3. ECvote Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 17:31, March 15, 2013 (UTC)
  4. Supreme Emperor (talk) 15:12, March 16, 2013 (UTC)
  5. ECvote Winterz (talk) 19:03, March 17, 2013 (UTC)
  6. ECvote Commander Code-8 G'day, mate 07:11, March 18, 2013 (UTC)

Object

  1. — DigiFluid(Whine here) 13:18, March 14, 2013 (UTC)
    • Minor grammatical quirk... This article starts out "A transit route, Citypath 515 was located in Cityblock Kesk-319 ...." To me, that flows rather awkwardly and might read better if it was tweaked to the more simple "Citypath 515 was a transit route located in Cityblock..." However, this is not an objection I feel especially strong about, so I won't mind terribly if you disagree and want it struck. I just think it would read better that way.
      • Fixed. Thanks for looking it over. 501st dogma(talk) 16:42, March 14, 2013 (UTC)

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