Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Chandrilan cologne

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Chandrilan cologne

• Nominated by: VergenceScatter (talk) 03:08, 7 September 2023 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: There's always time for a chandrila nom
• Date Archived: 01:09, 12 September 2023 (UTC)
• Final word count: 120 words (0 introduction, 91 body, 29 behind the scenes)
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(3 ECs/1 Users/4 Total)

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Support

1. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 21:12, 9 September 2023 (UTC)
2. Lewisr (talk) 21:33, 9 September 2023 (UTC)
3. Erebus Chronus ^(Talk) 15:07, 11 September 2023 (UTC)
4. —spookywilloww^talk 01:04, 12 September 2023 (UTC)

Object

Lew

• I believe you'll need to amend the Battle of Endor date:P
  • Dammit, fixed VergenceScatter (talk) 17:20, 7 September 2023 (UTC)
• 'The smell caused Wexley's nose to twitch, which, much to her irritation, caused Calrissian to wink at her' could you change one of the uses of caused to something else? Lewisr (talk) 11:05, 7 September 2023 (UTC)
  • Done VergenceScatter (talk) 17:20, 7 September 2023 (UTC)
• I think something about the 'He now takes both her hands and pulls her up.' before her smelling the cologne should be included Lewisr (talk) 22:35, 7 September 2023 (UTC)
  • Added, thanks VergenceScatter (talk) 21:00, 9 September 2023 (UTC)

Anil

• Per the Layout Guide, no need for a full release date for the book. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 13:28, 9 September 2023 (UTC)
  • Fixed VergenceScatter (talk) 21:00, 9 September 2023 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 01:04, 12 September 2023 (UTC)