Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Capture of the Trumpet's Call

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Capture of the Trumpet's Call

Nominated by: Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 14:01, 26 February 2022 (UTC)
Nomination comments: RIP Trumpet's Call, or Eyesore, or Careful Buyer
WookieeProject (optional): WP:NOVELS, WP:SWBF

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AmazinglyCool (talk) 14:56, 26 February 2022 (UTC)
Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 12:52, 8 March 2022 (UTC)
Provided Fan's objection is handled, that confused me a bit too. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 02:51, 10 March 2022 (UTC)
—spookywilloww^talk 04:07, 10 March 2022 (UTC)
LucaRoR ^(Talk) 13:32, 17 March 2022 (UTC)
Samonic (Talk) 16:35, 20 March 2022 (UTC)

~~You might wanna check some of the grammar.~~ AmazinglyCool (talk) 14:21, 26 February 2022 (UTC)
- I'm unsure what you're referring to. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 14:49, 26 February 2022 (UTC)
  - My bad, when reading I missed a word. Disregard this. AmazinglyCool (talk) 14:56, 26 February 2022 (UTC)

"An infiltration team, devised by officers aboard[1] the Imperial II-class Star Destroyer[3] Herald," I'm unclear as to what this means-was the plan developed by the destroyer's officers, or was the team comprised of the destroyer's officers? Fan26 (Talk) 17:14, 1 March 2022 (UTC)
- Verge and Tabor Seitaron thought of the plan to target another rebel starship as part of the hunt for Chalis, a special forces commander assembled the actual infiltration team. Those three are the officers, the infiltrators are different. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 23:44, 1 March 2022 (UTC)
  - I'd say it ought to be reworded; "devised" doesnt feel like the right word here tbh Fan26 (Talk) 19:39, 10 March 2022 (UTC)
    - Devised was used because it roped in Tabor and Verge, but I've changed it regardless. The Special Forces commander is somewhat notable anyways. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 19:01, 13 March 2022 (UTC)

~~Is that quote correct "They must have slaughtered everyone [on?] the Trumpet's Call" Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 10:33, 2 March 2022 (UTC)~~
~~The captain is infobox exclusive Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 10:33, 2 March 2022 (UTC)~~
I think we can mention that the Imperials were eventually uncovered and the rebels realised the ship had been captured, since that speaks of the capture itself. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 10:33, 2 March 2022 (UTC)
~~Currently the article is sorted by the letter C for Capture. It should be sorted by T for Trumpet Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 10:33, 2 March 2022 (UTC)~~
- All addressed. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 14:04, 2 March 2022 (UTC)
  - I think you should specifically mention the rebels later realised the ship had been captured Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 10:14, 3 March 2022 (UTC)
    - How does this look? Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 19:32, 4 March 2022 (UTC)

~~"The Trumpet's Call is damaged and captured" I don't think this is a casuality.~~ LucaRoR ^(Talk) 19:49, 8 March 2022 (UTC)
- In the past, the injured/MIA have been listed in the casualties section for certain events I have gone through outside the SAN. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 14:44, 9 March 2022 (UTC)
  - Per Cambridge dictionary: "a person injured or killed in a serious accident or war." I think we can consider destroyed things casualities, but not damaged or captured ships. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 19:41, 10 March 2022 (UTC)
    - Sure, changed. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 19:01, 13 March 2022 (UTC)

~~here is a redlink, which should be fixed. Samonic (Talk) 09:11, 17 March 2022 (UTC)~~
- Forgot to add "Imperial" in the link, fixed. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 10:03, 17 March 2022 (UTC)
  - Good job. Samonic (Talk) 16:35, 20 March 2022 (UTC)

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 19:05, 20 March 2022 (UTC)