Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/CZ-332

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CZ-332

• Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 12:20, November 15, 2013 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:

(4 ECs/0 Users/4 Total)

Support

1. Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 05:48, November 23, 2013 (UTC)
2. 501st dogma^(talk) 13:43, November 23, 2013 (UTC)
3. Winterz (talk) 01:53, December 5, 2013 (UTC)
4. Supreme Emperor (talk) 04:12, December 5, 2013 (UTC)

Object

1. Exiled Jedi
   • "The droid worked with the shop's owner, a Human named Nols, in selling a wide range of first and second-hand equipment, with the pair being able to find items that were requested, but which they didn't have for sale, elsewhere on the Wheel." Could you split this sentence?--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 01:00, November 16, 2013 (UTC)
     • Split. Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:32, November 16, 2013 (UTC)
2. Supreme
   • Would you mind rewording the third sentence a bit? Reads a bit awkward to me. Supreme Emperor (talk) 04:31, November 27, 2013 (UTC)
     • Done. Ayrehead02 (talk) 23:51, December 2, 2013 (UTC)
3. Winterz
   • Just the usual picky context on the Galactic Civil War, sir. Winterz (talk) 01:25, December 4, 2013 (UTC)
     • Context added. Ayrehead02 (talk) 08:34, December 4, 2013 (UTC)

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