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CIS admiralty
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17:19, September 26, 2020 (UTC)Erebus Chronus (talk)
- Nomination comments:
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- Braha'tok enthusiast (Hello there) 15:51, September 27, 2020 (UTC)
- TK-462 (talk) 18:49, September 27, 2020 (UTC)
Object
Freed fanboy
Is there any way you can make the first sentence so "naval" isn't stated twice? I don't think the first time is necessary if you explicitly say the command unit is part of the CIS's "naval forces".Braha'tok enthusiast (Hello there) 15:25, September 27, 2020 (UTC)- Better?
15:45, September 27, 2020 (UTC)Erebus Chronus (talk)
- Better?