Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/C-1023 request

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C-1023 request

  • Nominated by: AxMech (talk) 20:11, 8 September 2023 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: First from a long list of CAs I held onto for a while.
  • Date Archived: 21:35, 15 September 2023 (UTC)
  • Final word count: 171 words (0 introduction, 142 body, 29 behind the scenes)
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Support

  1. ECvote TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 23:08, 9 September 2023 (UTC)
  2. ECvote Lewisr (talk) 21:28, 10 September 2023 (UTC)
  3. Erebus Chronus (Talk) 19:11, 15 September 2023 (UTC)
  4. ECvote —spookywillowwtalk 21:35, 15 September 2023 (UTC)

Object

Erebus
  • Please include the episode's name in the BTS.
  • Can a quote be added? Erebus Chronus (Talk) 20:16, 8 September 2023 (UTC)
    • Added bothAxMech (talk) 20:20, 8 September 2023 (UTC)
Lew
  • You should note who the officer was speaking to
  • I think some context for why the officer brought it up is needed Lewisr (talk) 21:56, 8 September 2023 (UTC)
  • Context for Pershing and the Galactic Concordance is needed
    • Added context
      • Is the context for the Galactic Concordance citable to the episode itself? Lewisr (talk) 21:37, 9 September 2023 (UTC)
        • Probably not. Replaced with a generic mention of the post-civil war era.AxMech (talk) 21:40, 9 September 2023 (UTC)
  • The part of the quote 'I'd have to check if that's even possible' seems to potentially conflict with what you have included, 'He added, however, that although Amnesty personnel were theoretically allowed to file the request.' Because it seems possible they might not even be able to file such a request. So I think you need to amend to reflect Lewisr (talk) 00:30, 9 September 2023 (UTC)
    • You're right, fixed thatAxMech (talk) 21:00, 9 September 2023 (UTC)
  • Are the pronouns for the lab tech citable to the episode? Lewisr (talk) 19:57, 10 September 2023 (UTC)
    • That's the kind of nitpicking I unironically love about AN reviews. Fixed AxMech (talk) 21:09, 10 September 2023 (UTC)
Anil
  • Do you think Category:Reports and forms would be applicable here? TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 14:43, 9 September 2023 (UTC)
    • I don't think so, since we don't know exactly what the C-1023 is exactly. It could involve anything from a committee hearing to, indeed, submitting a form or report.AxMech (talk) 21:00, 9 September 2023 (UTC)
      • Fair enough, but the article currently states that it was "a form that could be submitted." TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 21:18, 9 September 2023 (UTC)
        • Good point. Replaced "form" with "document", since the officer mentions a "filing" so it's definitely something written.AxMech (talk) 21:37, 9 September 2023 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 21:35, 15 September 2023 (UTC)