Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Bunta

The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a Comprehensive article nomination that was unsuccessful. Please do not modify it.

Bunta

• Nominated by: Marvacian Archivist (talk) 21:32, 22 July 2024 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:
• Date Archived: 02:35, 7 August 2024 (UTC)
• Final word count: 208 words (0 introduction, 169 body, 39 behind the scenes)
• Word count at nomination time: 167 words (0 introduction, 131 body, 36 behind the scenes)
• WookieeProject (optional):

(0 ECs/0 Users/0 Total)

(Votes required: 2 EC vote(s) required to reach minimum. Additional 3 user or 1 EC vote required to pass.)

Support

Object

Lew

• The color being green is infobox exclusive Lewisr (talk) 01:48, 23 July 2024 (UTC)
  • Done. Marvacian Archivist (talk) 09:08, 23 July 2024 (UTC)
• Olega equires context Lewisr (talk) 01:48, 23 July 2024 (UTC)
  • Addressed. Marvacian Archivist (talk) 09:08, 23 July 2024 (UTC)
• Did you check these for potential sources of bunta? Lewisr (talk) 01:48, 23 July 2024 (UTC)
  • None of these sources show bunta. Marvacian Archivist (talk) 10:31, 23 July 2024 (UTC)
    • They may not show bunta but this highlights article mentions 'poisonous bunta leaves' for example. I'd recommend checking again for mentions like poison or etc Lewisr (talk) 15:14, 23 July 2024 (UTC)
      • Alright took a look and doesn't mention bunta directly and indirectly. Only found mention of the poison in the link provided above and have updated the article accordingly. Marvacian Archivist (talk) 20:52, 23 July 2024 (UTC)

Comet

• Glows is also infobox exclusive
  • Done. Marvacian Archivist (talk) 09:08, 23 July 2024 (UTC)
• You should add a quote
  • Addressed. Marvacian Archivist (talk) 09:08, 23 July 2024 (UTC)
• After Torbin's death, there's a conversation where Osha identifies the poison that I think should be mentioned CometSmudge (talk) 02:16, 23 July 2024 (UTC)
  • Done. Marvacian Archivist (talk) 09:18, 23 July 2024 (UTC)

spookly

• wordcounter.net check shows 169 words in the body, thus necessitating sectioning.
  • As in an intro is required? Marvacian Archivist (talk) 20:27, 23 July 2024 (UTC)
    • Well yes; in this case, sectioning would mean adding an intro and sectioning the current content to Description and History. Once done, the wordcount has to be checked again to see if it's under 250 or not. Likely, to be taken to GAN.—spookywilloww^talk 20:59, 23 July 2024 (UTC)
• If the poison was physically present on Olega, then that oo counts as an infobox location.
  • Done. Marvacian Archivist (talk) 20:24, 23 July 2024 (UTC)
• All numbers under 100 to be spelled out instead of written numerically (ie the 16 in there)
  • 16 number now addressed. Marvacian Archivist (talk) 20:24, 23 July 2024 (UTC)
• Brendok coven bit should ideally be introduced earlier as only later mentioning the coven died doesn't establish that Mae and Osha were part of it (and thus learned how to use bunta during that time, as part of the coven) and seems a bit out of context.—spookywilloww^talk 15:05, 23 July 2024 (UTC)
  • Done. Marvacian Archivist (talk) 20:26, 23 July 2024 (UTC)

Comments

Vote to remove nomination (EC only)

1. Objection from Spooky unaddressed for 15 days, did try message Marvac but no response as of yet Lewisr (talk) 01:29, 7 August 2024 (UTC)
2. —spookywilloww^talk 01:31, 7 August 2024 (UTC)
3. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 02:34, 7 August 2024 (UTC)