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Blumfruit muffin

  • Nominated by: AmazinglyCool CIS roundel (talk) 23:21, 22 February 2022 (UTC)
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Support

  1. Loqiical (talk) 11:48, 26 February 2022 (UTC)
  2. Make sure you're all good with the copy-edit. Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 00:21, 27 February 2022 (UTC)
  3. Gotta love a muffin that moves the plot forward. VergenceScatter (talk) 16:54, 1 March 2022 (UTC)
  4. ECvote Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 09:20, 2 March 2022 (UTC)
  5. ECvote OOM 224 19:02, 7 March 2022 (UTC)

Object

Luca
  • Per Layout Guide, novels should only provide the release year in the BTS. LucaRoR Sigil of House Serenno (Talk) 09:26, 2 March 2022 (UTC)
  • Does something happen after Skywalker finds the muffins' crumbs? It currently isn't clear to me why the crumbs were there. LucaRoR Sigil of House Serenno (Talk) 11:54, 2 March 2022 (UTC)
  • Anakin became a Jedi Knight in 22 BBY, so he should be a Padawan in 27 BBY. LucaRoR Sigil of House Serenno (Talk) 13:01, 2 March 2022 (UTC)
OOM
  • Per WP:MOS, please use ASCII quotation marks (') instead of "smart" quotation marks (’).
  • Did Anakin say that quote immediately after finding the muffin crumbs? If so, then it would be more accurate to say "upon finding" in the quote attribution.
  • It's better to introduce the subject of an article in its singular form rather than its plural form.
  • Do sources say "the blumfruit" or simply "blumfruit"?
    • Sources just say "blumfruit," so I fixed that.
  • "the forest moon Endor" — "forest" here isn't relevant context. However, you could say "the Forest Moon of Endor" instead since that is a proper noun for Endor.
  • "Native" can be linked to Homeworld/Legends. OOM 224 07:54, 6 March 2022 (UTC)
    • Fixed all. AmazinglyCool CIS roundel (talk) 12:40, 6 March 2022 (UTC)
      • You missed one of the apostrophes. Also, I don't see a need for having "The" in front of "Blumfruit muffin." Finally, since "Forest Moon of Endor" is just one subject, the entirety of that should be linked to Endor/Legends. OOM 224 13:27, 6 March 2022 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 19:02, 7 March 2022 (UTC)