Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Blaster pistol (Coruscant police droid model)

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Blaster pistol (Coruscant police droid model)

  • Nominated by: Coruscantfan (Talk) 18:07, January 7, 2013 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: My ongoing obsession with all things CSF

(3 ECs/1 Users/4 Total)

Support

  1. Winterz (talk) 19:57, January 7, 2013 (UTC)
  2. ECvote 501st dogma(talk) 23:15, January 7, 2013 (UTC)
  3. ECvote Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 04:34, January 9, 2013 (UTC)
  4. ECvote—Jedi Kasra ("Indeed.") 02:27, January 15, 2013 (UTC)

Object

  1. 501st
    • You need to mention Coruscant in the bio.
      • Done.
    • Mention of the encyclepedia entery in the BtS would be good. 501st dogma(talk) 21:47, January 7, 2013 (UTC)
  2. Exiled Jedi
    • Please provide a little context about when and where the scuffle occured and who it involved.
      • Done.
    • "The blaster pistol was issued to the planet Coruscant's police droids should they feel the need to use lethal force." This sentence makes it sound like they were issued the pistols whenever they felt the need to use lethal force. Please reword.
      • Done.
    • I can't see anything in the encyclopedia entry that says the blasters were used only for lethal force. I think it would probably be better to say something along the lines of the guns were used by the police droids to apprehend criminals, including instances where the droids deemed lethal force to be necessary.--Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 23:43, January 7, 2013 (UTC)
    • One more thing: Star Wars Encyclopedia links to the 1998 book. Please link to this article instead.--Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 23:49, January 7, 2013 (UTC)

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