Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Blaster Fire

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Blaster Fire

  • Nominated by: ThePedantry (talk) 17:38, 15 October 2024 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:
  • Date Archived: 21:28, 3 November 2024 (UTC)
  • Final word count: 147 words (0 introduction, 84 body, 63 behind the scenes)
  • Word count at nomination time: 159 words (0 introduction, 92 body, 67 behind the scenes)
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Support

  1. ECvote —spookywillowwtalk 02:06, 2 November 2024 (UTC)
  2. ECvote Lewisr (talk) 02:25, 2 November 2024 (UTC)
  3. ECvote Fan26 (Talk) 21:27, 3 November 2024 (UTC)

Object

spookly
  • Ah, so: this will apply to all noms done thus far (to fix) and ones in the future, but really, the Gamemechanics should have the game name a la: {{Gamemechanics|Star Wars Outlaws|canon=1}}. Including the game name is pretty standard by now; we don't get a lot of VG noms though so I'd assume it got overlooked here until now, but there's usually not a reason to not.—spookywillowwtalk 02:24, 20 October 2024 (UTC)
    • I updated it here and the other recent noms I got approved
  • Tying into Editor's comment below, it seems as if these fathiers have the same model and then just random poses. The BTS is a straight copy-paste of the jockey ones; this should be tweaked to be fathier-focused rather than leading in with jockeys as the primary topic.—spookywillowwtalk 16:06, 22 October 2024 (UTC)
  • Seems like 3 ABY is not cited to a date note in the first sentence. But also—articles should be presented chronologically, so Blaster Fire being born in 0 ABY should go before the Canto Cup 3 ABY sentence. (And also, given another sentence establishes what year the Canto Cup took place and it isn't a very long article, it's redundant to have the year restated for the height and weight info, just "At the time of the Canto Cup" alone should suit.—spookywillowwtalk 20:09, 25 October 2024 (UTC)
    • Reworded the article based on this ThePedantry (talk) 18:12, 1 November 2024 (UTC)

Comments

  • If they are hologram only, is there a reason an image isn't included? Editoronthewiki (talk) 17:40, 15 October 2024 (UTC)
    • So I could but they use the same model and a random pose for each of the fathiers so it would either be the same picture for multiple of the fathiers. ThePedantry (talk) 19:29, 17 October 2024 (UTC)
  • Small note, for if more of these fathiers get nominated, to carry over.—spookywillowwtalk 20:11, 25 October 2024 (UTC)

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 21:27, 3 November 2024 (UTC)