- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a comprehensive article nomination that was unsuccessful. Please do not modify it.
Bitt Panith
- Nominated by:--Bonslywizard
(Send a transmission...It's perfectly legal!) 23:36, August 13, 2010 (UTC) - Nomination comments: At least there's no way this one will make it over 250...
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- Jujiggum
Needs a BTS- Added.--Bonslywizard(Send a transmission...It's perfectly legal!) 20:14, August 14, 2010 (UTC)
- Italicization. Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 20:20, August 14, 2010 (UTC)
- Italicized.--Bonslywizard(Send a transmission...It's perfectly legal!) 00:09, August 16, 2010 (UTC)
- Still one missing. This is usually something I'd fix myself, but this has popped up more than once in your articles, please try to remember this in the future. Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 01:35, August 17, 2010 (UTC)
- Darn things...--Bonslywizard
(Send a transmission...It's perfectly legal!) 17:18, August 19, 2010 (UTC)
- Darn things...--Bonslywizard
- Still one missing. This is usually something I'd fix myself, but this has popped up more than once in your articles, please try to remember this in the future. Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 01:35, August 17, 2010 (UTC)
- Italicized.--Bonslywizard
- Italicization. Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 20:20, August 14, 2010 (UTC)
- Added.--Bonslywizard
- Could easily use a P&T
- Added.--Bonslywizard(Send a transmission...It's perfectly legal!) 20:14, August 14, 2010 (UTC)
- You could definitely add more—judging by the lead quote alone, he was apparently confident in his ability to defeat the Jedi. Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 20:20, August 14, 2010 (UTC)
- I've added another sentence on that.--Bonslywizard(Send a transmission...It's perfectly legal!) 00:09, August 16, 2010 (UTC)
- Wording's rather awkward here. And are you sure that's all you can add? Did he perhaps dislike the Jedi? Please be as thorough here as possible. Go through the source once more and make sure there are no further details you can add regarding his personality; and also his appearance, a description of which should also go in the P&T. Also, I've stricken the next objection, but please do this for the bio as well, anyway. There seem to be quite a few details that you missed the first time around—go through the source carefully and make absolutely certain that you are not leaving any more details out. Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 01:35, August 17, 2010 (UTC)
- I've added another sentence on that.--Bonslywizard
- You could definitely add more—judging by the lead quote alone, he was apparently confident in his ability to defeat the Jedi. Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 20:20, August 14, 2010 (UTC)
- Added.--Bonslywizard
Is this as detailed as you could get? Judging from the quote, it sounds like there might be some more details from the source about Panith that you could put in there. Make sure you are as thorough as possible.- I'll try, but I don't know how much I can do, considering how little he appears...--Bonslywizard(Send a transmission...It's perfectly legal!) 20:14, August 14, 2010 (UTC)
- Why don't you mention anything about Dooku cutting off his funds in the body? Why did Dooku cut off his funds? Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 20:20, August 14, 2010 (UTC)
- I've moved that part to the body as opposed to the P&T and added why.--Bonslywizard(Send a transmission...It's perfectly legal!) 00:09, August 16, 2010 (UTC)
- I've moved that part to the body as opposed to the P&T and added why.--Bonslywizard
- Why don't you mention anything about Dooku cutting off his funds in the body? Why did Dooku cut off his funds? Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 20:20, August 14, 2010 (UTC)
- I'll try, but I don't know how much I can do, considering how little he appears...--Bonslywizard
- Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 05:01, August 14, 2010 (UTC)
Comments
- Removed due to unaddressed objections for two weeks. Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 20:06, September 1, 2010 (UTC)