Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Bier

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Bier

• Nominated by: Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 12:33, January 2, 2012 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Stuff from the Jedi Apprentice series. How could I not write this article as a German :P

(2 ECs/1 Users/3 Total)

Support

1. Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 16:54, January 2, 2012 (UTC)
2. Menkooroo 19:01, January 2, 2012 (UTC)
3. Master Jonathan _{Jedi Council Chambers} Monday, January 2, 2012, 21:47 UTC

Object

1. Exiled Jedi
   • Please create an article for the offshore-mine.
     • Redlinked for now. I'll create the article later today. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 14:23, January 2, 2012 (UTC)
   • Please create an article for aquasuit.
     • Redlinked for now. I'll create the article later today. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 14:23, January 2, 2012 (UTC)
   • Please create an article for the other miner talking to Obi-Wan.
     • Redlinked for now. I'll create the article later today. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 14:23, January 2, 2012 (UTC)
   • You need to mention when he died in the body of the article.
     • Done. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 14:23, January 2, 2012 (UTC)
   • Before mentioning when he died, it would be a good idea to say what time he lived during.
     • Added. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 14:23, January 2, 2012 (UTC)
   • Don't forget to add Category:Individuals of unidentified species.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 13:31, January 2, 2012 (UTC)
     • I hate that category. :P Thanks for the review. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 14:23, January 2, 2012 (UTC)
2. From the Council Chambers:
   • Obi-Wan is not a Padawan at this time; he is a member of the AgriCorps. Please correct the article to reflect this.
     • Ah yes, he wants to be a Padawan in the novel and he is not one yet. Changed to "Jedi Agricultural Corps member". Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 21:45, January 2, 2012 (UTC)
   • Otherwise, good job. Master Jon _Holocomm Monday, January 2, 2012, 21:40 UTC
     • Thanks. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 21:45, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Comments

• All redlinks are killed. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 16:00, January 2, 2012 (UTC)