Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Bequin Fobas

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Bequin Fobas

• Nominated by: Darth Karika^{will destroy your planet!} 01:08, September 5, 2010 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Hutt Hutt Hutt Hike!

(1 ECs/3 Users/4 Total)

Support

1. —Master Jonathan ^{(Jedi Council Chambers)} 03:45, September 5, 2010 (UTC)
2. Well Jon then we are two of a kind. :P Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 11:12, September 5, 2010 (UTC)
3. ~ SavageBob 13:53, September 5, 2010 (UTC)
4. SoresuMakashi^{(Everything I tell you is the truth)} 23:36, September 6, 2010 (UTC)

Object

1. I simply don't understand the American obsession with football:
   • "Like many other members of his species, Fobas worked for a Hutt: crime lord Zorba Desilijic Tiure." This seems to suggest that many members of his species worked specifically for Zorba, but at the same time doesn't rule out the species just working for Hutts in general. Either way, please clarify.
     • SavageBob took care of this. —Master Jonathan ^{(Jedi Council Chambers)} 03:45, September 5, 2010 (UTC)
   • On the rare occasions I watch sports of any kind, I prefer football. :P —Master Jonathan ^{(Jedi Council Chambers)} 01:28, September 5, 2010 (UTC)
2. Prepare to be savaged...
   • The OS mentions that Fobas was a "famed" attorney, so some mention of this fame should be made in the article.
   • The final sentence of his biography should be rewritten to say who exactly reminded Fobas that there were no appeals on Kip. 'Tis all. ~ SavageBob 03:41, September 5, 2010 (UTC)
     • Should be fixed. Darth Karika^{will destroy your planet!} 13:01, September 5, 2010 (UTC)
   • Almost there! :) One more thing: please link and at least stub the article Kip magistrate. ~ SavageBob 13:33, September 5, 2010 (UTC)
     • Created and linked. Darth Karika^{will destroy your planet!} 13:51, September 5, 2010 (UTC)

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