Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Beaumont Kin's father

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Beaumont Kin's father

  • Nominated by: Liverpool92Ackbar HS 04:11, 19 November 2021 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:
  • WookieeProject (optional): WP:COMICS

(2 ECs/3 Users/5 Total)

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Support

  1. Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 10:07, 20 November 2021 (UTC)
  2. Poor Merry :( Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 09:12, 26 November 2021 (UTC)
  3. LucaRoR CIS roundel (Talk) 16:18, 30 November 2021 (UTC)
  4. ECvote JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 19:49, 2 December 2021 (UTC)
  5. ECvote OOM 224 13:37, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

Object

Braha
  • I think "promising future" should have some elaboration. Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 10:48, 19 November 2021 (UTC)
    • The source says, "Just mom and dad. That's why I decided to throw away a promising future and join the Resistance." Honestly I don't think there is much more to say.--Liverpool92Ackbar HS 05:03, 20 November 2021 (UTC)
OOM
  • Following up on BE's objection above, TROS VD says he had an academical career ahead of him
  • "was a male individual" — this doesn't tell the reader anything they don't already know, so the first sentence should be reworded.
  • There's no need to mention "in which X was mentioned" in a date note when it's only used to cite the timeframe of one story
  • "join" should be in past tense since, unlike "follow," it's not something that Kin "refused" OOM 224 09:00, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 13:37, 5 December 2021 (UTC)