Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Bavakar cardio package

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Bavakar cardio package

• Nominated by: SHCosmos (He/Him ✦ Talk) 16:19, 24 May 2024 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:
• Date Archived: 17:12, 2 June 2024 (UTC)
• Final word count: 232 words (0 introduction, 158 body, 74 behind the scenes)
• Word count at nomination time: 229 words (0 introduction, 155 body, 74 behind the scenes)
• WookieeProject (optional): WP:KOTOR WP:VG

(3 ECs/1 Users/4 Total)

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Support

1. Lewisr (talk) 17:06, 25 May 2024 (UTC)
2. Beastmatser (talk) 05:25, 1 June 2024 (UTC)
3. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 16:34, 2 June 2024 (UTC)
4. —spookywilloww^talk 17:12, 2 June 2024 (UTC)

Object

Beastmatser

• This sentence reads pretty weird: 'Such implants were complex, requiring a trained user only use one at a time.'. 'granting' instead of 'requiring' is possibly better, if the original meaning is preserved. Beastmatser (talk) 18:26, 24 May 2024 (UTC)
  • I reworded it a bit. SHCosmos (He/Him ✦ Talk) 23:04, 24 May 2024 (UTC)

Lew

• The first sentence of the second paragraph looks to need another reference before the date Lewisr (talk) 19:41, 24 May 2024 (UTC)
  • Added. SHCosmos (He/Him ✦ Talk) 23:04, 24 May 2024 (UTC)
    • Not sure how easy it would be to check the game to confirm, but does it mention Manaan is in the Inner Rim? Lewisr (talk) 03:52, 25 May 2024 (UTC)
      • I could not for the life of me get the dialog.tlk file to open, but that was supposed to be referenced to the campaign guide anyway :p SHCosmos (He/Him ✦ Talk) 16:52, 25 May 2024 (UTC)
        • Ah well lucky then in that case:P Lewisr (talk) 17:06, 25 May 2024 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 17:12, 2 June 2024 (UTC)