Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Battle of Carida (Clone Wars)

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Battle of Carida (Clone Wars)

• Nominated by: Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 11:05, December 10, 2011 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Part One of "TCW Wild Space Battle Project". Inspired by Cal's magnificent attempt above.

(2 ECs/1 Users/3 Total)

Support

1. Toprawa and Ralltiir 19:02, December 15, 2011 (UTC)
2. --Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 15:08, December 19, 2011 (UTC)
3. Nicely done. ~Savage 15:24, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Object

1. Toprawa:
   • Two things. Firstly, I think the article can still use a little bit of expansion regarding Yoda's analysis in that lead quote. You can say something to the effect of "The Republic's defeat at Carida, coupled with similar defeats elsewhere, led Yoda to believe the Republic needed another victory in the war."
     • Done. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 15:46, December 15, 2011 (UTC)
   • Secondly, I think it would be appropriate to add the {{Imo}} template to the Appearances item, since it's not technically mentioned in full. Toprawa and Ralltiir 06:03, December 15, 2011 (UTC)
     • Adressed. Thanks for the review. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 15:46, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

1. Cal Jedi
   • {{Youmay}} goes above {{Conjecture}}.--Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 22:51, December 17, 2011 (UTC)
     • Done. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 13:15, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

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